英文文章语法问题In Chorus of Mushrooms by Hiromi Goto,each character

英文文章语法问题
In Chorus of Mushrooms by Hiromi Goto,each character builds their identities as Japanese – Canadian by different methods.The story states the three generation of women conflicted by the problem of being a Japanese and a Canadian.Naoe and keiko both have different level of feelings about their unique identity.The granddaughter Murasaki struggles in the position between the two extremes and her identity as a Japanese -Canadian.
Keiko is one of the outstanding characters in the story because she is kind of a person that would do whatever to fit in the society,no matter it is right or wrong.This character makes reader more memorable.For instance,Keiko chooses not to speak Japanese with anyone in order to fit in the Canadian culture.“If you live in Canada,you should live like a Canadian and that’s how I raised my own daughter.”(Goto 189) Furthermore,the writer mention Keiko as a typical Canadian-Japanese which means she’s Canadian inside her mind,but having an Asian looking outside.Keiko chooses to renounce her Japanese root.She behaves like there is nothing different about her and other Canadian.The purpose of doing this is to create a culture conflict for her,and this is the most interesting characteristic that she owns.
While Keiko behaves like there is nothing different from the other Canadian,her daughter Murasaki does not avoid her Japanese identity.Instead,she tries to understand her own family history.She is a Canadian inside,but because of her Japanese appearance,she always been treated as ‘others’.Marisaki needs to face the cultural conflict between Keiko and Naoe.Keiko behaves like a Canadian while Naoe behaves like Japanese.As a result,Murasaki struggle between two lives,one as a Canadian,and one as a Japanese.And she has two names,her mother call her Muriel but her grandmother call her Murasaki.
Unlike Keiko and Murasaki,the life style of Naoe shows clearly that she is not ready to accept the new country.Not only she does not feel that she belongs there,but also does not show any interest in the new culture,the people,the language or the food in Canada.Instead of learning English she insist on speaking Japanese loudly all day long,she tries hard to keep her way,She knows a little bit of English but refuses to speak it：“I could speak the other to her,but my lips refuse and my tongue swells in revolt."(Goto 15) As the result she finds her approaches of being a Japanese-Canadian,and then she leaves her house and travels many places to enjoy her Canadian life.

第一段：
1.把each改成every,否则和后面冲突,主谓不一致.
同时,把builds改成build.如果一定想用each,就要把their identities as Japanese – Canadian 中的复数形式全部改成单数形式.
2.three generation --》three generations
3.conflicted by 把介词改成for
4.a Japanese and a Canadian把连词改成or
5.different level --》different levels
6.their unique identity--》identities
第二段：
1.she is kind of a person that would do whatever to fit--》she is such a person as would do everything she could to fit herself
2.reader--》readers
3.the writer mention--》mentioned
4.but having an Asian looking outside--》but she has an Asian looking outside
5.She behaves like --》She behaves as
6.other Canadian--》other Canadians
第三段：
1.behaves like--》behaves as
2.other Canadian--》other Canadians
3.her daughter Murasaki does not avoid her Japanese identity.前加上连词while
4.she always been treated as ‘others’--》she is always treated as.
5.Naoe behaves like Japanese--》a Japanese
6.one as a Canadian,and one as a Japanese--》being a Canadian or being a Japanese
7.And she has two names,--》把and移到逗号后
8.Unlike Keiko and Murasaki,--》Unlike those of Keiko and Murasaki
9.Not only she does not feel that she belongs there,but also does not show any interest in the new culture,the people,the language or the food in Canada.--》Neither does she feel that she belongs the area,nor she shows.
10.she insist on speaking Japanese loudly all day long--》she insists on.aloud all day long
11.she tries hard to keep her way,--》前面加连词and,way后面的逗号改成句号
12.knows a little bit of English --》a little English就可以了
13.refuses to speak it：“I could speak the other to her,but my lips refuse and my tongue swells in revolt."--》refuses to speak it as she think,“..”
14.As the result she finds her approaches of being a Japanese-Canadian,and then she leaves her house and travels many places to enjoy her Canadian life.
--》Finally,she finds.travels around.