帮我把翻译过来的汉语意思改通顺点

帮我把翻译过来的汉语意思改通顺点
Have you seen a sandstorm? I would like to share with you my personal esperience of the sandstorm in northern China. On April 7, 2004, we decided to visit a city of Jilin Province. It was supposed to be four hours’ drive from the place where we lived. We woke up at about 7:00 only to see the most amazing storm we had ever seen. The sky was dark as if it was midnight. The lights from the few cars that dared travel in the streets were yellowish. So we had to stay at home, waiting for a better condition for our trip.The wind was fairly strong and might have been stronger at night  before we woke up. The visibility(能见度) at this point was close to 20 m. About two hours later the visibility increased to 50 m and stayed so until about 10:00 am. When the dust lifted(消散) a little and the visibility increased to 200 m, we decided to drive out. However, everybody on the road was enveloped in thick frog with dust and the sky glowed with a dark yellow color, so we hardly see each other clearly . Sometimes, the wind suddenly picked up a lot of dust and sand and the visibility occasionally decreased to 20-50 m, making it very dangerous to drive.    The dust remained in the air until the late afternoon when it slightly lifted. At last, we arrived at the city, but the trip that normally took about four hours, took us nearly eight hours. The dust remained in the air for about two more days. On the third day a short period of rain dropped as the cold front passed the region. So the terrible scene came to an end, and everything took on a lively and fresh appearance again. 你看到过一个沙尘暴吗?我想与大家分享我个人的最强的沙尘暴在中国北部.2004年4月7日,我们决定去拜访一吉林省城市.这本来应该是四个小时的车程,我们住的地方.我们醒了,大约7点只看到最惊人的暴风雨中,我们从来不曾见到过的.天空是黑好像是午夜.灯光从几辆汽车旅行,敢街道被黄色的.所以我们不得不呆在家里,等待一个更好的条件,我们的旅行.风是非常强大的,可能是前一晚强势,我们醒来了.能见度(能见度)在这一点上接近20米.大约两小时后的可见性增加到50米,住,直到大约上午10点.当尘埃提升(消散)一个小的和能见度增加到200米,我们决定开车出去.然而,每个人在路上被裹挟在厚青蛙用灰尘和天空映出暗黄色的颜色,所以我们不清楚看见彼此.有时,风突然拿起大量的灰尘和沙子和能见度降低到偶尔下,这使它非常危险的驾驶.尘土留在空中,直到下午的晚些时候当它轻微提升.最后,我们到达这个城市,但旅者通常花了大约四个小时,我们花了将近八小时.空气中尘埃保持大约两天.第三天,一短的雨下降冷锋通过的区域.所以那可怕的情景接近尾声的时候,所有的一切都有了一个活泼新鲜的样子了.

你看到过沙尘暴吗?我想与大家分享一下我自己在中国北方遭遇沙尘暴的经历.2004年4月7日,我们决定去访问吉林省的一座城市.我们住的地方距离那里有四个小时的车程.7点左右我们起床时,只看到了我们从来不曾见到过的、最惊人的暴风雨.天空像午夜一样漆黑.从几辆敢在这种街道行驶的汽车上射出的灯光都是微黄色的.所以我们不得不呆在住的地方,等待一个适合我们旅行的、更好的条件.风力非常强大,在我们醒来以前的午夜可能更加强烈.此时的能见度接近20米.大约两小时后能见度增加到50米,并一直保持到上午10点左右.当尘埃消散一些,能见度增加到200米时,我们决定开车出去.然而,路上的每个人都被挟裹在带有灰尘的雾霾之中,天空映出暗黄的颜色,所以我们看不清楚彼此.有时,风突然掀起大量的沙尘,能见度会突然降低到20-50米,这使车辆行驶变得非常危险.尘土留在空中,直到下午晚些时候才有些微抬升、消散.最后,我们到达这个城市,但通常只需花费四小时左右的旅程,却让我们用了将近八个小时.尘埃在空中大约持续了两天.第三天,由于冷锋过境,带来了短时期的降雨.所以那可怕的情景告一段落,一切事物都再次拥有了一个生动新鲜的样子.