大师作文网求高手们把我的英文作业修改得漂亮一些,
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求高手们把我的英文作业修改得漂亮一些,
What was your favorite toy or game to play with as achild?
My Favorite Toy
My most favorites are car with as a child.Once,my fatherbought a child’s car and gave me on I was eight years old.While Iwas touching it,I was afraid,but I looked at it,and I felt that it was abeautiful car.Its color is yellow and red.Then,myfather taught me learn how to drive the car for a week,so I learnedand liked it more and more,even I was very happy.No matter I often like toplay with the lovely toy after my school.I drove my car every day.Therefore,I bought a car last year; I love my car too,because my toy had abig influence on me.
What was your favorite toy or game to play with as achild?
My Favorite Toy
My most favorites are car with as a child.Once,my fatherbought a child’s car and gave me on I was eight years old.While Iwas touching it,I was afraid,but I looked at it,and I felt that it was abeautiful car.Its color is yellow and red.Then,myfather taught me learn how to drive the car for a week,so I learnedand liked it more and more,even I was very happy.No matter I often like toplay with the lovely toy after my school.I drove my car every day.Therefore,I bought a car last year; I love my car too,because my toy had abig influence on me.
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What was your favorite toy or game to play with as a child?
My Favorite Toy
When I was a child my favorite toy was a toy car.Once,my father bought a toy car for kids and gave it to me on my eighth birthday.When I first touched it,I was scared.But on a second look,I felt that it was a beautiful car.Its color was yellow and red.Then,my father had taught me how to drive the car for about a week.Just as I learned how to drive it,I liked it more and more.I was so happy at that time.I often liked to play with it after school.I drove my car almost every day.Therefore,I bought a real car last year.I love my new car too,because my toy car had a big influence on me.
What was your favorite toy or game to play with as a child?
My Favorite Toy
When I was a child my favorite toy was a toy car.Once,my father bought a toy car for kids and gave it to me on my eighth birthday.When I first touched it,I was scared.But on a second look,I felt that it was a beautiful car.Its color was yellow and red.Then,my father had taught me how to drive the car for about a week.Just as I learned how to drive it,I liked it more and more.I was so happy at that time.I often liked to play with it after school.I drove my car almost every day.Therefore,I bought a real car last year.I love my new car too,because my toy car had a big influence on me.