大师作文网请老师改一下作文
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I want to join the Internation Youth Games. Because it's my dream.If I join the Internation Youth Games. I will be happy .This is a great chance that mang people do not have. I am good at running. I have been running since I was ten years old. I think this sport very interesting and can help me to keep fit.I often plays table tennis.Beacuse it makes me very happy. I want to play for a team .I don't want to miss the chance. Please let me join the Internation Youth Games. 请老师帮忙改一下，15分满分我能得多少分？ 10分满分我能得多少分？
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I want to join the International Youth Games. Because it's my dream.If I join the International Youth Games,，(此处用逗号）I will be happy .This is a great chance that many people do not have. I am good at running. I have been running since I was ten years old. I think this sport is very interesting and
can help me to keep fit.I often plays table tennis.Beacuse it makes me very happy. I want to play for a team .I don't want to miss the chance. Please let me join the International Youth Games.
因为没有写作要求，从内容来看，全文叙述内容完整，语言具有逻辑性，层次分明，但是要注意断句和标点符号的正确使用。个别词出现笔误。如果是书信体，请注意英文书信的格式。满分10分，此文可得8分。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
I want to join the International Youth Games. Because it's my dream.If I join the International Youth Games,，(此处用逗号）I will be happy .This is a great chance that many people do not have. I am good at running. I have been running since I was ten years old. I think this sport is very interesting and
can help me to keep fit.I often plays table tennis.Beacuse it makes me very happy. I want to play for a team .I don't want to miss the chance. Please let me join the International Youth Games.
因为没有写作要求，从内容来看，全文叙述内容完整，语言具有逻辑性，层次分明，但是要注意断句和标点符号的正确使用。个别词出现笔误。如果是书信体，请注意英文书信的格式。满分10分，此文可得8分。
最终答案：略