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四级作文 谁给我评下分啊``
题目：How do students spend their summer vacations?
要求：1，过去学生是如何度过暑假的
2，现在许多学生在暑假期间也非常繁忙
3，我对次现象的看法
How do students spend their summer vacations?
students always stay home and watch TV to spend their summer vacationsago.some active students may go swimming or play balls.It's so unintrestive,even the sky were grey.They have a lot of spare time and kmow nothing to do. They were SO unhappy.
But now,more and more students can not stop. They are not always playing,in stead of it was study or have a part time job.They are so busy to play, but they are so happy. They open their doors to go to the socirty,get known to everybody and make theirskys blue.They feel enjoy it.
I think it's a good thing to us. people in school or collage are popluar with workers. They came to accept a pineeor in school and feel intrest. students do a good job, not only in the part time job,but also in their eract study,they get to kmow more, this is a good condition to our world.
题目：How do students spend their summer vacations?
要求：1，过去学生是如何度过暑假的
2，现在许多学生在暑假期间也非常繁忙
3，我对次现象的看法
How do students spend their summer vacations?
students always stay home and watch TV to spend their summer vacationsago.some active students may go swimming or play balls.It's so unintrestive,even the sky were grey.They have a lot of spare time and kmow nothing to do. They were SO unhappy.
But now,more and more students can not stop. They are not always playing,in stead of it was study or have a part time job.They are so busy to play, but they are so happy. They open their doors to go to the socirty,get known to everybody and make theirskys blue.They feel enjoy it.
I think it's a good thing to us. people in school or collage are popluar with workers. They came to accept a pineeor in school and feel intrest. students do a good job, not only in the part time job,but also in their eract study,they get to kmow more, this is a good condition to our world.
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理由：条理清晰，没啥语法错误，对于小学生来书已经不错了。
建议描写细致一些
理由：条理清晰，没啥语法错误，对于小学生来书已经不错了。
建议描写细致一些
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