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Hello, everyone. I'm very pleased to meet you. Firstly,I'd like to introduce myself to you. My name is fangdan, and my English name is Lynn. I was graduated from Henan Foreign Trade School.my major is Business English.I;m very outgoing,friendly and confidence.I like dancing and singing. But I only good at dancing. beacause of this, I can apply it to my teaching. Of course, I'm short at the teaching experience, but I will work hard and try my best to do duing the teaching. So I believe working hark can bring us more oppotunities, I am a hard working person especially do the things which i am interested in. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.
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Hello, everyone. I'm very pleased to meet you. Firstly,I'd like to introduce myself to you. My name is fangdan, and my English name is Lynn. I was graduated from Henan Foreign Trade School.my major is Business English.I;m very outgoing,friendly and confidence.I like dancing and singing. But I only good at dancing. beacause of this, I can apply it to my teaching. Of course, I'm short at the teaching experience, but I will work hard and try my best to do duing the teaching. So I believe working hark can bring us more oppotunities, I am a hard working person especially do the things which i am interested in. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.
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I;m very outgoing,friendly and confidence
I'm an very outgoing,friendly and confident person.
but i only good at dancing.
but I am only good at dancing.
I'm short at the teaching experience,
I'm lacking of teaching experince,
duing the teaching
during my teaching
especially do the things
especially at the things
I'm an very outgoing,friendly and confident person.
but i only good at dancing.
but I am only good at dancing.
I'm short at the teaching experience,
I'm lacking of teaching experince,
duing the teaching
during my teaching
especially do the things
especially at the things