大师作文网作文求批改 求打分
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题目是假定你是李华 请你的必有PEter写封信 告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在的城市开会 带去他想要的那幅中国画 同时询问他是否可以接机 信中还需说明 李明：高个子 戴眼镜 航班号 CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30 我的作文：I had told you that I have a uncle named Liming。These days，he will have a meeting in your city and he will take a chinese paint with himself ，which you want 。So I want to ask you whether you can wait for him in the airport 。And now I will tell you something about him 。 First，he is tall，with glasses 。Second，the number of his flight is CA985。At last ，he will arrive at 11:30 a。m。 on Augest 6th。 I will be grateful if you can do it。 求批改 求打分 25分满
解题思路： 如下
解题过程：
同学，你好！
作文评改如下：
Dear Peter,
I have told you that I have an uncle named Li Ming. These days，he will have a meeting in your city and he will take a Chinese paint with himself，which you want.(定语从句很好) So I want to ask you whether you can meet（接站） him at the airport. And now I will tell you something about him, so that you can pick him up in the crowd easily.
First，he is tall，with glasses. (with 短语使语句灵活高档) Second，the number of his flight is CA985. At last，he will arrive at 11:30 am. on August 6th.
I will be grateful if you can do it. (最后收尾，很有人情味)（英语地道，句型高档）
Yours
Li Hua
1. 注意文章是书信格式
2. 区别英语标点，.
3. 总分总三段，文章要点全面，脉络清晰，语言流畅，略有小的失误。
4. 18分。 （标点很刺眼，打字失误，还是平时就这样书写？）
如有疑问，欢迎回复！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
同学，你好！
作文评改如下：
Dear Peter,
I have told you that I have an uncle named Li Ming. These days，he will have a meeting in your city and he will take a Chinese paint with himself，which you want.(定语从句很好) So I want to ask you whether you can meet（接站） him at the airport. And now I will tell you something about him, so that you can pick him up in the crowd easily.
First，he is tall，with glasses. (with 短语使语句灵活高档) Second，the number of his flight is CA985. At last，he will arrive at 11:30 am. on August 6th.
I will be grateful if you can do it. (最后收尾，很有人情味)（英语地道，句型高档）
Yours
Li Hua
1. 注意文章是书信格式
2. 区别英语标点，.
3. 总分总三段，文章要点全面，脉络清晰，语言流畅，略有小的失误。
4. 18分。 （标点很刺眼，打字失误，还是平时就这样书写？）
如有疑问，欢迎回复！
最终答案：略