大师作文网请问可以帮我看看这小段英语是否地道,哪里有错哪里需要改进.
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请问可以帮我看看这小段英语是否地道,哪里有错哪里需要改进.
hi,sorry about my late greeting.Maggie told me you two are good friends,we have a common great grandfather,but we almost have no ties of blood.And we never met before,though she used to live here for a long time.She said you and me were school mates,I’ve studied in VFMAC for a short time,and I also studied in Brack Ville and another school
hi,sorry about my late greeting.Maggie told me you two are good friends,we have a common great grandfather,but we almost have no ties of blood.And we never met before,though she used to live here for a long time.She said you and me were school mates,I’ve studied in VFMAC for a short time,and I also studied in Brack Ville and another school
以下是一些修改让这段英语更"地道":
Hi, Sorry about my late greetings.
Maggie told me that you were good friends (时态要一致). She and I share the same great grandfather. However, we are not related by blood, nor have we ever met, despite that she had lived here for a long time. She said that you and I went to the same schools. I've studied in VFMAC and Brack Ville. Which one did you go to?
Hi, Sorry about my late greetings.
Maggie told me that you were good friends (时态要一致). She and I share the same great grandfather. However, we are not related by blood, nor have we ever met, despite that she had lived here for a long time. She said that you and I went to the same schools. I've studied in VFMAC and Brack Ville. Which one did you go to?