大师作文网My name is Da Ming.My birthday is the 25th of December.It’s
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My name is Da Ming.My birthday is the 25th of December.It’s the Christmas day.
You know it’s also the birthday of a scientist Newton .He is a prodigy.So I have a clear head .Too.
I am a girl with short hair and I wear a pair of glasses.It doesn’t mean that I am a bookworm.In fact ,I don’t like reading books.I’m very naughty and dreamy.
There is the blue sky with white clouds .
I like the sky that NO.2 Middle school has.
If god gives the wings to me.I will be glad to fly in this beautiful sky.
We’re very lucky to be in the Class 14.
We will fighting.
You know it’s also the birthday of a scientist Newton .He is a prodigy.So I have a clear head .Too.
I am a girl with short hair and I wear a pair of glasses.It doesn’t mean that I am a bookworm.In fact ,I don’t like reading books.I’m very naughty and dreamy.
There is the blue sky with white clouds .
I like the sky that NO.2 Middle school has.
If god gives the wings to me.I will be glad to fly in this beautiful sky.
We’re very lucky to be in the Class 14.
We will fighting.
细节性建议
第一段有点罗嗦,直接写
I was born on the Christmas day.即可
第一段有点罗嗦,直接写
I was born on the Christmas day.即可
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