我的英语e-mail谈感想或者改改错

我的英语e-mail谈感想或者改改错
konwlegable:
I miss you.we are known.this is a third e-mail.
I'am dangzheng,a student.secently,I am very sad and unhappy beceuse my teacher
is so bad.He is often give me some problems.aslo,say a lot bad words to me.It makes me feel uncomfortable.I don't know why he did so.In my class,he aslo get on badly with others.My mother and father tell me not to think his words and study hardly.
He did'n say that I cleaned the classroom in the morning three week ago.Truth isn't so.I did'n say a word that time because I had konwed that he was ill.Although he spoke lots of bad word about me,I don't mind at all.I didn't say a word and saw him.
So he become anger.
To my happy,It doesn't batter my study.now,no one batter me.I'm feeling growing up.
This is my good familiar.I am growing up.
my dear sister or friend
best wishes!
我的英语不好嘛,别介意
自己写的

练习用英语写信?值得鼓励~给你改改吧~我把可以改的放在括号里面,自己看看～
首先说的是,开头要这样写：
Dear XXX,
Greeting from xx(your name)!
接下来是你的正文：
I miss you.（这句一般不放在开头,一般在结尾处）we are known.this is a third e-mail.（As we known,this is the third e-mail.）
I'am dangzheng,a student.secently(这词没有),I am very sad and unhappy beceuse my teacher
is so bad.He is often give me some problems.aslo,say a lot bad words to me.（He is mesns to me and make in trouble very often.）It makes me (to) feel uncomfortable.I don't know why he did so.In my class,he aslo get on badly with others.(he also not gets along with others very well)My mother and father tell me (do)not to(去掉to) think(care about) his words and study hardly.
He did'n(didn't) say that I (I've)cleaned the classroom in the morning three week(weeks) ago.Truth isn't so.(这句我没看懂你想说什么) I did'n（didn't） say a word（anything）（at） that time because I had konwed（konwn） that he was ill.Although he spoke lots of bad word （words）about me,I don't（didn't） mind at all.I didn't say a word and saw him.
So he become（became） anger.
To my happy,It doesn't batter（spoil） my study.now,no one batter me.（no one can strike me）I'm feeling growing up.（i feel i am growing up）
This is my good familiar.（这句我不懂你想表达什么）I am growing up.
my dear sister or friend （这句不要放在这里,应写：Yours,你的名字）
best wishes!
觉得这样改可以吗?