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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,共有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Manager,
I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well , but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed . Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear . The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider about these problems and make some improvement.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。


小题1:well改为 good

小题2:problem改为problems

小题3:much改为 many

小题4:annoyed改为annoying

小题5:too改为so

小题6:bear∧it

小题7:signs改为sign

小题8:terribly 改为terrible

小题9:will 改为would

小题10:a改为the