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I.m Lihua .I like panda verymnch sine I was child. when i know panda called sunlin gave dirth to a baby called BaiaYun in American Zoo. I.m very delighted that the news .so I.m still pay an attetion to the baby panda grow up .during 3 year.Today he is 3 older. I hope he grown up healthy .Of couse I.m congratulation to happy birthday. can you give me phone about his life.Thank yon.改错
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I'm Li Hua .I like panda very much since I was a child. When I know the panda called Sunlin gave birth to a baby called BaiaYun in the American Zoo. I'm very delighted . so I still paid (an去掉) attention to the growth of the baby panda during the last 3 years.Today he is 3 years old . I hope he grow up healthily .Of course, I will wish him a happy birthday. Can you give me a phone to talk about his life.
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