大师作文网帮忙改错润色英语讲稿My definition of successWhat is success?Different
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My definition of success
What is success?Different person has different opinion.May be you think that have much money is success,or have a lot of fame is success.But another one may be think that have a happy family is success.
In my opinion,success is that people can do something they real interested in,and they can feel pleasure and satisfaction from what they do.But how we can to succeed?As the Ads said “Just do it”?Of course not.If you only “Just do it”,you will find that you get nothing.Famous American actor Charles Chapin has said “You have to believe in yourself,that’s the secret of success”.There is no doubt that if you want to success,you should have a clear target and believe in it.Only you have faith in what you really want to do,you can stick to do it and never bored.
At last,I hope everyone can find his own way to success!That’s all,thank you!
英文实在太烂……恳请各位达人帮忙……另外不要出现太难的单词和太复杂的句子
My definition of success
What is success?Different person has different opinion.May be you think that have much money is success,or have a lot of fame is success.But another one may be think that have a happy family is success.
In my opinion,success is that people can do something they real interested in,and they can feel pleasure and satisfaction from what they do.But how we can to succeed?As the Ads said “Just do it”?Of course not.If you only “Just do it”,you will find that you get nothing.Famous American actor Charles Chapin has said “You have to believe in yourself,that’s the secret of success”.There is no doubt that if you want to success,you should have a clear target and believe in it.Only you have faith in what you really want to do,you can stick to do it and never bored.
At last,I hope everyone can find his own way to success!That’s all,thank you!
英文实在太烂……恳请各位达人帮忙……另外不要出现太难的单词和太复杂的句子
不知道你现在上几年级,就帮你改改小毛病吧
第2句：照你的想法看,不同的人有不同的想法,那么opinion要变复数
第3句：Maybe连在一起才可以做副词放在句首,分开就是“也许是”的意思了.还有主句的动词不妨用mean“意味着、指”,更让人舒服一些,而且不能在句子里随便用you,你怎么知道读者或听者就一定是你所想的那样呢.这句话可以表达为：Success means different things for different people.Some may equate it with fame,some with money and still some with a happy family.
第二段中,感兴趣应该用be interested in,这里就该写成they are interested in,而且既然是动词,当然要用副词修饰,所以要用really,后面的逗号和and太罗嗦,作为从句还又断开了,不如改成bring them pleasure and satisfaction,那么整句话可以大致修改为：In my opinion,success means people can do something that they are really interested in and could bring them pleasure and satisfaction.
下一句,how和what的用法你可能没有注意区别,这里应该说what can we do to succeed?
接下来,看得出来你想说只像广告中说的那样行不通,还应该在做之前要树立目标,要像卓别林说的建立信心,但是你后来又用了only这个词,就有点过了,不如改成正确的目标、坚定的信心、果断的行动三合一是成功的保证.这句话也很好翻译,自己动动手吧.
总结的话中,hope不妨改为wish,表达一种祝愿.
是不是要做presentation,加油,
第2句：照你的想法看,不同的人有不同的想法,那么opinion要变复数
第3句：Maybe连在一起才可以做副词放在句首,分开就是“也许是”的意思了.还有主句的动词不妨用mean“意味着、指”,更让人舒服一些,而且不能在句子里随便用you,你怎么知道读者或听者就一定是你所想的那样呢.这句话可以表达为：Success means different things for different people.Some may equate it with fame,some with money and still some with a happy family.
第二段中,感兴趣应该用be interested in,这里就该写成they are interested in,而且既然是动词,当然要用副词修饰,所以要用really,后面的逗号和and太罗嗦,作为从句还又断开了,不如改成bring them pleasure and satisfaction,那么整句话可以大致修改为：In my opinion,success means people can do something that they are really interested in and could bring them pleasure and satisfaction.
下一句,how和what的用法你可能没有注意区别,这里应该说what can we do to succeed?
接下来,看得出来你想说只像广告中说的那样行不通,还应该在做之前要树立目标,要像卓别林说的建立信心,但是你后来又用了only这个词,就有点过了,不如改成正确的目标、坚定的信心、果断的行动三合一是成功的保证.这句话也很好翻译,自己动动手吧.
总结的话中,hope不妨改为wish,表达一种祝愿.
是不是要做presentation,加油,
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