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This morning it was fine and cool,but I walked to school as usual.On my way school,the sky turned dark suddenly.About ten minutes late,it started to rain cats and dogs.Since I didn't expect it will rain today,I had no umbrella with me.I was anxious to find a shelter,but to my disappoint,there were no buildings in sight.I thought I'd catch a cold because I was complete wet.Fortunately,a kind woman approached me and let me share his umbrella.She went with me to my school,either.I sincerely thanked her for her kindness.On think of my experience today,I felt very warm.
This morning it was fine and cool,but I walked to school as usual.On my way school,the sky turned dark suddenly.About ten minutes late,it started to rain cats and dogs.Since I didn't expect it will rain today,I had no umbrella with me.I was anxious to find a shelter,but to my disappoint,there were no buildings in sight.I thought I'd catch a cold because I was complete wet.Fortunately,a kind woman approached me and let me share his umbrella.She went with me to my school,either.I sincerely thanked her for her kindness.On think of my experience today,I felt very warm.
It was fine and cool this morning.I walked to school as usual.But all in a sudden,on the way to school the sky turned dark and drops fall down from the sky.I had no umbrella with me.so soon my clothes get wet.avoiding from catching a cold ,i tried to shelter from rain but i failed.feeling cold and helpless,it is a kind-hearted old lady that i was asked to share an umbrella by.she did not leave untill i got school safely.i appreciated to her kindness and thanks her for times.it really makes me feel like being wrapped with warmness every time i think of what happened to me.
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