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My mother died months before

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My mother died months before
and my father was often out on
the business,so I felt very lonely.
I missed my old life then my
mother was still alive and we
were happy.Laura was my best
friends and cared about me very
much.One Friday when I thought
I will have to spend the weekend
alone.I couldn’t help cry.She sat
with me,not saying something
while I cried until I felt calmly.
From that day on she often
encouraged me face my life
bravely.Gradually I began to
consider the reality calmly.Under
her help I was able to deal with
my feelings better.
My mother died months before
改正如下:
My mother died months 【 before--ago 】 and my father was often out on 【去掉the 】business,so I felt very lonely.I missed my old life 【then--when】 my mother was still alive and we were happy.Laura was my best 【friends--friend】and cared about me very much.One Friday when I thought I 【will--would】 have to spend the weekend alone,I couldn’t help 【cry--crying】.She sat with me,not saying【something--anything】while I 【cried--was crying】 until I felt 【calmly--calm】.From that day on,she often encouraged me 【加上to】face my life bravely.Gradually,I began to consider the reality calmly.【Under--With】her help,I was able to deal with my feelings better.