大师作文网请帮我检查和修改一下这封邮件（很短）,
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请帮我检查和修改一下这封邮件（很短）,
这是我给一位英国网络作家写的邮件,怕有错的和不地道的地方,有什么不合适的地方,请帮我改一下,
Christmas is coming.I have to send this e-mail ahead of time beacause I can only surf the internet once a week(I'm a high school student.)
The heavy schoolwork makes me so busy that I can't have enough sleep.when I'm tired I' will read the story Falls Chance and that will make me feel better.To be sincere,this is the best English story I've ever read.You and Rolf are really great writer.
Wishing you all the blessings of a beautiful Christmas season.
这是我给一位英国网络作家写的邮件,怕有错的和不地道的地方,有什么不合适的地方,请帮我改一下,
Christmas is coming.I have to send this e-mail ahead of time beacause I can only surf the internet once a week(I'm a high school student.)
The heavy schoolwork makes me so busy that I can't have enough sleep.when I'm tired I' will read the story Falls Chance and that will make me feel better.To be sincere,this is the best English story I've ever read.You and Rolf are really great writer.
Wishing you all the blessings of a beautiful Christmas season.
英文句子中词语没有错误,只有个别地方有比较小的失误.
Christmas Day is coming.I have to send this e-mail ahead of it because I can only surf on the internet once a week( I am a high school student).
The heavy schoolwork makes me so busy that I can't have enough sleep.When I am tired I will read the story Falls Chance which will make me feel better.To be sincere,this is the best English story that I've ever read.You and Rolf are really great writers.
Wishing you all the blessings of a beautiful Christmas season.
Christmas Day is coming.I have to send this e-mail ahead of it because I can only surf on the internet once a week( I am a high school student).
The heavy schoolwork makes me so busy that I can't have enough sleep.When I am tired I will read the story Falls Chance which will make me feel better.To be sincere,this is the best English story that I've ever read.You and Rolf are really great writers.
Wishing you all the blessings of a beautiful Christmas season.