大师作文网英语改错,半小时内求解决
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英语改错,半小时内求解决
My hair was used to be very long.i dreamed of donating it to sick children which had lost their hair.My teacher has donated her hair,so i wanted to donate mine,either.My dream came ture las christmas.after i told my teacher i was ready donate my hair ,she praised me.then we paid the visit to a hairdresser.the hairdresser cut 20 inch from my long hair and styled what was left .it was hard to say good-bye to my hair,so to help others made me feel happily.now some of my friends are growing their hair long so that they can donate them this year.
My hair was used to be very long.i dreamed of donating it to sick children which had lost their hair.My teacher has donated her hair,so i wanted to donate mine,either.My dream came ture las christmas.after i told my teacher i was ready donate my hair ,she praised me.then we paid the visit to a hairdresser.the hairdresser cut 20 inch from my long hair and styled what was left .it was hard to say good-bye to my hair,so to help others made me feel happily.now some of my friends are growing their hair long so that they can donate them this year.
My hair was(was去掉) used to be very long.i dreamed of donating it to sick children which (改为who)had lost their hair.
My teacher has(改为had) donated her hair,so i wanted to donate mine,either(改为too).My dream came ture last christmas.after i told my teacher i was ready (加上to)donate my hair ,she praised me.then we paid the (改为a)visit to a hairdresser.the hairdresser cut 20 inch(改为inches) from my long hair and styled what was left .it was hard to say good-bye to my hair,so(改为but) to help others made me feel happily(改为happy).now some of my friends are growing their hair long so that they can donate them (改为it)this year.
My teacher has(改为had) donated her hair,so i wanted to donate mine,either(改为too).My dream came ture last christmas.after i told my teacher i was ready (加上to)donate my hair ,she praised me.then we paid the (改为a)visit to a hairdresser.the hairdresser cut 20 inch(改为inches) from my long hair and styled what was left .it was hard to say good-bye to my hair,so(改为but) to help others made me feel happily(改为happy).now some of my friends are growing their hair long so that they can donate them (改为it)this year.