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(请老师帮助修改作文，特别是语法错误请讲一讲。) 在一次英语班会上， 老师请同学以Proud of My School为主题发言。 请根据 下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。词数在80-100. 提示： 1.What does your school look like? 2. What fun do you have at school? 3.Why do you like your school? Proud of My School I proud of my school because she is very beautiful----she heve a huge playground, two new study buildings. And many school place are green and the other color so she look like a garden. And I will study good. In our school can play in the playground and in front of students buildings. So the other place we don't to play. It's few play place at our school so few fun place at our school. If you ask a question about "Why do you like your school?" I reply:" this school teacher is very good and their teach us very carefully. And I many friends in this school. So I like it. Now, this is my favourite school!"
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解题过程：
Proud of My School
I ’m （形容词前要加be动词作谓语动词）proud of my school because she is very beautiful----there is a huge playground, two new study buildings in our school.（某地方存在/有什麽最好用there be+主语句型结构） And many school places（many修饰名词复数） are green and other colors so she looks（主语是单数she，所以谓语动词加s） like a garden. And I will study hard in it.
In our school I can play on the playground and in front of the students’ buildings. So in the other places we don't play. There are few play places at our school so
few fun places at our school. If you ask a question about "Why do you like your school?" I will reply:" this school teachers are very good and they (作主语用主格they)teach us very
carefully. And I have（缺谓语动词） many friends in this school. So I like it. Now, it is my favourite school!"
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Proud of My School
I ’m （形容词前要加be动词作谓语动词）proud of my school because she is very beautiful----there is a huge playground, two new study buildings in our school.（某地方存在/有什麽最好用there be+主语句型结构） And many school places（many修饰名词复数） are green and other colors so she looks（主语是单数she，所以谓语动词加s） like a garden. And I will study hard in it.
In our school I can play on the playground and in front of the students’ buildings. So in the other places we don't play. There are few play places at our school so
few fun places at our school. If you ask a question about "Why do you like your school?" I will reply:" this school teachers are very good and they (作主语用主格they)teach us very
carefully. And I have（缺谓语动词） many friends in this school. So I like it. Now, it is my favourite school!"
最终答案：略