大师作文网正老师,又来问您问题了.嘿嘿.
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正老师,又来问您问题了.嘿嘿.
Dear Dom,
How is everything going?
Several days ago, I’vesent you an email to ask about the MFA programme, and I feel anxious whether you cannot receive up message because mailing box system or the electric network reason.
I am writing to tell youthat I’ve sent an email to the course leaderto express how eager I am to join the programme. In the former email I have asked three questions and I still wonder about two of them.
1, How many students for MFA willyou recruit?
2, I want to know the tuition fee of the second year of the MFA, is it the same as that of the first year?
I am very appreciated it if you canhelp me, and looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All best,
Joanna
老师您看这封邮件我写的什么地方有问题.
Dear Dom,
How is everything going?
Several days ago, I’vesent you an email to ask about the MFA programme, and I feel anxious whether you cannot receive up message because mailing box system or the electric network reason.
I am writing to tell youthat I’ve sent an email to the course leaderto express how eager I am to join the programme. In the former email I have asked three questions and I still wonder about two of them.
1, How many students for MFA willyou recruit?
2, I want to know the tuition fee of the second year of the MFA, is it the same as that of the first year?
I am very appreciated it if you canhelp me, and looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All best,
Joanna
老师您看这封邮件我写的什么地方有问题.
没大问题
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