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帮我改改这短文,那里有错(英语),
I like holiday,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock.After I had had breakfast,I ofent do my homework until lunch.I aways have lunch whith my family.My mother,my father,my grendfather,my sister and I.In the afternoon,sometimes I sleep,and sometimes I play computer game or watch TV.At half past five,We have our dinner.Then I do some homework or go shopping.In the evening I ofent watch TV,Then sleep.
Sometimes I go to shopping whith my friend all day.sometimes I would the area friend's house play all day,sometimes swiming.
This is my summer holiday.
哪里有错就帮忙改一改哦~
I like holiday,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock.After I had had breakfast,I ofent do my homework until lunch.I aways have lunch whith my family.My mother,my father,my grendfather,my sister and I.In the afternoon,sometimes I sleep,and sometimes I play computer game or watch TV.At half past five,We have our dinner.Then I do some homework or go shopping.In the evening I ofent watch TV,Then sleep.
Sometimes I go to shopping whith my friend all day.sometimes I would the area friend's house play all day,sometimes swiming.
This is my summer holiday.
哪里有错就帮忙改一改哦~
gaichengzheyang:
I like holiday,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock.After I had had breakfast,I often do my homework until lunch.I aways have lunch whith my family.My mother,my father,my grendfather,my sister and I.In the afternoon,sometimes I sleep,and sometimes I play computer game or watch TV.At half past five,We have our dinner.Then I do some homework or go shopping.In the evening I often watch TV,Then sleep.
Sometimes I go to shopping whith my friend all day.sometimes I would go to the area friend's house play all day,sometimes go swimming.
This is my summer holiday.
I like holiday,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock.After I had had breakfast,I often do my homework until lunch.I aways have lunch whith my family.My mother,my father,my grendfather,my sister and I.In the afternoon,sometimes I sleep,and sometimes I play computer game or watch TV.At half past five,We have our dinner.Then I do some homework or go shopping.In the evening I often watch TV,Then sleep.
Sometimes I go to shopping whith my friend all day.sometimes I would go to the area friend's house play all day,sometimes go swimming.
This is my summer holiday.