大师作文网帮我看看这段英语自我介绍!
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帮我看看这段英语自我介绍!
帮我看下吧!看有错误没有,有的话帮我改一下!（包括大小写!）
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Hi!My name is Qin MingYu and my English name is ABBY.I'm a good girl.I'm 13 years.I likes orangs very much.I like play computer games.I have a dog,it's black and white,it neme is LaLa.I like blue.my super star is super junior.
This is me．
还有,”你想跟我做朋友吗?”用英文怎么写?
帮我看下吧!看有错误没有,有的话帮我改一下!（包括大小写!）
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Hi!My name is Qin MingYu and my English name is ABBY.I'm a good girl.I'm 13 years.I likes orangs very much.I like play computer games.I have a dog,it's black and white,it neme is LaLa.I like blue.my super star is super junior.
This is me．
还有,”你想跟我做朋友吗?”用英文怎么写?
妹妹有些部分呀修改!
Hi!
My name is Qin MingYu and my English name is ABBY.
I'm a good girl.I'm 13 years old.
I like oranges very much.I like playing computer games.
I have a dog,it's black and white,its neme is LaLa.I like blue.my super star is super junior.
This is me．
my super star is super junior.就这句话叔叔没看懂,
Hi!
My name is Qin MingYu and my English name is ABBY.
I'm a good girl.I'm 13 years old.
I like oranges very much.I like playing computer games.
I have a dog,it's black and white,its neme is LaLa.I like blue.my super star is super junior.
This is me．
my super star is super junior.就这句话叔叔没看懂,