大师作文网英语作文修改大家帮帮忙..我的英语写作水平不怎么样..帮忙修改一下..谢谢 A parent-teacher meeti
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英语作文修改
大家帮帮忙..我的英语写作水平不怎么样..帮忙修改一下..谢谢
A parent-teacher meeting
We will held a parent-teacher meeting about "How to have a meaningful summer hoilday." We will have the meeting in the Class One Grade Eight on 20th,June 2009.The meeting will start at 9:00a.m and finish at 11:00a.m.There will be 50 people take part in the meeting.First,we will discuss the student how to have a meaningful summer hoilday,and then the head teacher will tell the student some safety rules,at last the head teacher will give some advice on daily life and study.
大家帮帮忙..我的英语写作水平不怎么样..帮忙修改一下..谢谢
A parent-teacher meeting
We will held a parent-teacher meeting about "How to have a meaningful summer hoilday." We will have the meeting in the Class One Grade Eight on 20th,June 2009.The meeting will start at 9:00a.m and finish at 11:00a.m.There will be 50 people take part in the meeting.First,we will discuss the student how to have a meaningful summer hoilday,and then the head teacher will tell the student some safety rules,at last the head teacher will give some advice on daily life and study.
基本上这种较简单的作文不用要求太多,写得可以,条理清晰,有几处错误或不当
第一行 held改为hold,held是过去式了
第二行 in the Class ,the可以去掉,一般说那年那班不加the
第三行 参加会议一般用attend the meeting
we will discuss the problem that students how to have a meaningful
student最好都加s
还有些语法你们可能没学过,那就不用在意了,你的作文总体上像翻译,应该加上些自己的内容把文章连贯一下,比如前两句可以复和起来
We will held a parent-teacher meeting about "How to have a meaningful summer hoilday"in Class One Grade Eight on 20th,June 2009.
第一行 held改为hold,held是过去式了
第二行 in the Class ,the可以去掉,一般说那年那班不加the
第三行 参加会议一般用attend the meeting
we will discuss the problem that students how to have a meaningful
student最好都加s
还有些语法你们可能没学过,那就不用在意了,你的作文总体上像翻译,应该加上些自己的内容把文章连贯一下,比如前两句可以复和起来
We will held a parent-teacher meeting about "How to have a meaningful summer hoilday"in Class One Grade Eight on 20th,June 2009.