大师作文网评初三的英语作文,打分并将错误之处修改(满分10分） （先谢谢帮我改作文的人,我的作文水平很烂的）
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评初三的英语作文,打分并将错误之处修改(满分10分） （先谢谢帮我改作文的人,我的作文水平很烂的）
以My---------为题,描述心中最重要的人或最难忘的人
要求：要包含以下几点：Who is the person in your heart?Why is the person so important in your heart?What will you learn from the person in your heart?
字数：60~80之间
内容：My parents
My parents in my heart.
When I was a children,parents look afterme and give all they have to us.At the part of the happy time from our parents to make.They give us some useful ideasand always believe us.
We become mature grils or boys,but our parents are no longer young.We learned some knowladges from our parents.They make a huge influence for us.
we love our parents.We will give something back to our parents.
以My---------为题,描述心中最重要的人或最难忘的人
要求：要包含以下几点：Who is the person in your heart?Why is the person so important in your heart?What will you learn from the person in your heart?
字数：60~80之间
内容：My parents
My parents in my heart.
When I was a children,parents look afterme and give all they have to us.At the part of the happy time from our parents to make.They give us some useful ideasand always believe us.
We become mature grils or boys,but our parents are no longer young.We learned some knowladges from our parents.They make a huge influence for us.
we love our parents.We will give something back to our parents.
My parents are the person who in my heart
When we were children ,parents looked after us and gave all that they had for us . (At the part of the happy time from our parents to make)(这句真看不懂).They give us some useful ideas and believe us all the time .
Time flies ! We become matural grils or boys,but our parents are no longer young.We had learned much knowladges from our parents.They have a huge influence on us.
we shoud love our parents and give something back to them .
再问： ‘At the part of the happy time from our parents to make’这一句是打算写‘父母给予了我一个快乐的童年’，帮我改改吧，谢谢呐~
When we were children ,parents looked after us and gave all that they had for us . (At the part of the happy time from our parents to make)(这句真看不懂).They give us some useful ideas and believe us all the time .
Time flies ! We become matural grils or boys,but our parents are no longer young.We had learned much knowladges from our parents.They have a huge influence on us.
we shoud love our parents and give something back to them .
再问： ‘At the part of the happy time from our parents to make’这一句是打算写‘父母给予了我一个快乐的童年’，帮我改改吧，谢谢呐~
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