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中专生 大专生不用看了
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The story was great and the background was beautiful,it really felt like an ancient Chinese city.This original story is one of the best since Shrek.And the meaning behind the story may be even better!The story is about Po,an overweight panda who is the son of a noodle maker,who dreams of Po following in his footsteps.But Po longs to be a ninja fighter.Po is as you know is a panda bear and the film's unlikely hero:as the bigger than life and completely lovable bear voiced by the comic genius Jack Black.Po is a Sweet but clumsy,bear who hears the news the ancient and long awaited dragon warrior will be named,so he runs (as much as he can) to hear who will be named at the celebration.
Without giving too much away,when an "accident" seems to name Po as the dragon warrior (much to the horror of Master Shifu (voiced perfectly by Dustin Hoffman) and the disappointment of Furious Five:Tigress (Angelina Jolie),Viper (Lucy Liu),Mantis (Seth Rogen),Crane (David Cross) and Monkey (Jackie Chan).Shifu must find a way to train him.One hilarious moment after another continues until Shifu recognizes Po's true driving force.This is just in time as the villain Tai Lung (Ian McShane),a snow leopard has returned as he believe is the true Dragon Warrior.
It's the story about a lazy,irreverent slacker panda,named Po,who is the biggest fan of Kung Fu around...which doesn't exactly come in handy while working every day in his family's noodle shop.Unexpectedly chosen to fulfill an ancient prophecy,Po's dreams become reality when he joins the world of Kung Fu and studies alongside his idols,the legendary Furious Five -- Tigress,Crane,Mantis,Viper and Monkey -- under the leadership of their guru,Master Shifu.But before they know it,the vengeful and treacherous snow leopard Tai Lung is headed their way,and it's up to Po to defend everyone from the oncoming threat.Can he turn his dreams of becoming a Kung Fu master into reality?Po puts his heart - and his girth - into the task,and the unlikely hero ultimately finds that his greatest weaknesses turn out to be his greatest strengths.
中专生 大专生不用看了
功夫熊猫
The story was great and the background was beautiful,it really felt like an ancient Chinese city.This original story is one of the best since Shrek.And the meaning behind the story may be even better!The story is about Po,an overweight panda who is the son of a noodle maker,who dreams of Po following in his footsteps.But Po longs to be a ninja fighter.Po is as you know is a panda bear and the film's unlikely hero:as the bigger than life and completely lovable bear voiced by the comic genius Jack Black.Po is a Sweet but clumsy,bear who hears the news the ancient and long awaited dragon warrior will be named,so he runs (as much as he can) to hear who will be named at the celebration.
Without giving too much away,when an "accident" seems to name Po as the dragon warrior (much to the horror of Master Shifu (voiced perfectly by Dustin Hoffman) and the disappointment of Furious Five:Tigress (Angelina Jolie),Viper (Lucy Liu),Mantis (Seth Rogen),Crane (David Cross) and Monkey (Jackie Chan).Shifu must find a way to train him.One hilarious moment after another continues until Shifu recognizes Po's true driving force.This is just in time as the villain Tai Lung (Ian McShane),a snow leopard has returned as he believe is the true Dragon Warrior.
It's the story about a lazy,irreverent slacker panda,named Po,who is the biggest fan of Kung Fu around...which doesn't exactly come in handy while working every day in his family's noodle shop.Unexpectedly chosen to fulfill an ancient prophecy,Po's dreams become reality when he joins the world of Kung Fu and studies alongside his idols,the legendary Furious Five -- Tigress,Crane,Mantis,Viper and Monkey -- under the leadership of their guru,Master Shifu.But before they know it,the vengeful and treacherous snow leopard Tai Lung is headed their way,and it's up to Po to defend everyone from the oncoming threat.Can he turn his dreams of becoming a Kung Fu master into reality?Po puts his heart - and his girth - into the task,and the unlikely hero ultimately finds that his greatest weaknesses turn out to be his greatest strengths.
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The story was great and the background was beautiful,it really felt like an ancient Chinese city.(这句怪怪的,改：The great story and the fascinating background really foregrounds the beauty of an ancient Chinese city.)This original story is one of the best since (the movie "Shrek".) (Don't start a sentence with "and")And the meaning behind the story may be even better!The story is about Po,an overweight panda who is the son of a noodle maker (and) who dreams of Po following in his footsteps.(However,) Po longs to be a ninja fighter.Po is a panda bear and the film's unlikely hero:as the bigger than life and completely lovable bear voiced by the comic genius Jack Black.Po is a Sweet but clumsy,bear who hears the news (that) the ancient and long awaited dragon warrior will be named);) (therefore),he (hurries)to (see the winner who will be named at the celebration.)
(Surprisingly),an "accident" (happens which names) Po as the dragon warrior (much to the horror of Master Shifu (voiced perfectly by Dustin Hoffman) and the disappointment of Furious Five:Tigress (Angelina Jolie),Viper (Lucy Liu),Mantis (Seth Rogen),Crane (David Cross) and Monkey (Jackie Chan).Shifu must find a way to train him.One hilarious moment after another continues until Shifu recognizes Po's true driving force.This is just in time as the villain Tai Lung (Ian McShane),a snow leopard(,) has returned(;) as he believe(s) (that he is) the (real) Dragon Warrior.
It's the story about a lazy,irreverent panda,named Po,who is the biggest fan of Kung Fu.(However,his interest in Kung Fu will never) come in handy while working every day in his family's noodle shop.(Being) unexpectedly chosen to fulfill an ancient prophecy,Po's dreams become reality when he joins the world of Kung Fu and studies alongside his idols,the legendary Furious Five -- Tigress,Crane,Mantis,Viper and Monkey -- under the leadership of their guru,Master Shifu.But before they know it,the vengeful and treacherous snow leopard(,) Tai Lung(,) is headed their way,and it's (Po's responsibility) to defend everyone from the oncoming threat.Can he turn his dream(这里用单数） of becoming a Kung Fu master into reality?（Po is so determined that he) puts his heart and his girth into the task.(To the satisfaction of all,) the unlikely hero ultimately finds that his greatest weaknesses turn out to be his greatest strengths.
The story was great and the background was beautiful,it really felt like an ancient Chinese city.(这句怪怪的,改：The great story and the fascinating background really foregrounds the beauty of an ancient Chinese city.)This original story is one of the best since (the movie "Shrek".) (Don't start a sentence with "and")And the meaning behind the story may be even better!The story is about Po,an overweight panda who is the son of a noodle maker (and) who dreams of Po following in his footsteps.(However,) Po longs to be a ninja fighter.Po is a panda bear and the film's unlikely hero:as the bigger than life and completely lovable bear voiced by the comic genius Jack Black.Po is a Sweet but clumsy,bear who hears the news (that) the ancient and long awaited dragon warrior will be named);) (therefore),he (hurries)to (see the winner who will be named at the celebration.)
(Surprisingly),an "accident" (happens which names) Po as the dragon warrior (much to the horror of Master Shifu (voiced perfectly by Dustin Hoffman) and the disappointment of Furious Five:Tigress (Angelina Jolie),Viper (Lucy Liu),Mantis (Seth Rogen),Crane (David Cross) and Monkey (Jackie Chan).Shifu must find a way to train him.One hilarious moment after another continues until Shifu recognizes Po's true driving force.This is just in time as the villain Tai Lung (Ian McShane),a snow leopard(,) has returned(;) as he believe(s) (that he is) the (real) Dragon Warrior.
It's the story about a lazy,irreverent panda,named Po,who is the biggest fan of Kung Fu.(However,his interest in Kung Fu will never) come in handy while working every day in his family's noodle shop.(Being) unexpectedly chosen to fulfill an ancient prophecy,Po's dreams become reality when he joins the world of Kung Fu and studies alongside his idols,the legendary Furious Five -- Tigress,Crane,Mantis,Viper and Monkey -- under the leadership of their guru,Master Shifu.But before they know it,the vengeful and treacherous snow leopard(,) Tai Lung(,) is headed their way,and it's (Po's responsibility) to defend everyone from the oncoming threat.Can he turn his dream(这里用单数） of becoming a Kung Fu master into reality?（Po is so determined that he) puts his heart and his girth into the task.(To the satisfaction of all,) the unlikely hero ultimately finds that his greatest weaknesses turn out to be his greatest strengths.