大师作文网英文短文改错 澳洲题目
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英文短文改错 澳洲题目
dear kew:
is now just two week and I will be with you , I can no belief it ! I looking forward very much stay with you and your family,and see london the first time. I'm very exciting.
my city, sar paufr is biggest and noisyest city in briasil , is not very well for tourists is more commercial city. also it have very much traffic and pollution, maybe london have the same. i like best here in sar paufr the entertainment,you can find good fans and restaurants, who no close until the latest custermer leave.
my friend joar he came in london the last year and he has gone to teh theatre see the buddy hofly story ,he say me it was wonderfull, I like to see also.
my plane arrive heathnow.,terminal 3at 6:30am ,is very kind you meet me so early morning!
Thank you
I hope very much improve my english when I come to london.
see you soon and Happy new year!
Fevnadr
求高人帮忙改错 这是我在澳洲的第一次作业 希望能做的好点 ··谢谢大家的帮忙·
dear kew:
is now just two week and I will be with you , I can no belief it ! I looking forward very much stay with you and your family,and see london the first time. I'm very exciting.
my city, sar paufr is biggest and noisyest city in briasil , is not very well for tourists is more commercial city. also it have very much traffic and pollution, maybe london have the same. i like best here in sar paufr the entertainment,you can find good fans and restaurants, who no close until the latest custermer leave.
my friend joar he came in london the last year and he has gone to teh theatre see the buddy hofly story ,he say me it was wonderfull, I like to see also.
my plane arrive heathnow.,terminal 3at 6:30am ,is very kind you meet me so early morning!
Thank you
I hope very much improve my english when I come to london.
see you soon and Happy new year!
Fevnadr
求高人帮忙改错 这是我在澳洲的第一次作业 希望能做的好点 ··谢谢大家的帮忙·
Dear Kew:
It is now only two weeks left then I will be there with you,I cannot believe it!I am looking forward very much to stay with you and your family,and to see London for the first time.I'm very excited.
My city,St.Paul is the biggest and noisiest city in Brazil.It is not so nice for tourists and is more commercial.It has very heavy traffic and pollution,maybe London is the same.What I like here in St.Paul is the entertainment; you can find lots of fans and good restaurants which is not close until the last customer has left.
My friend John visited London last year and he has been to the theatre to see the Buddy Holly story,he told me it was wonderful,I'd like to see it as well.
My Flight will land at Heathrow terminal 3 at 6:30 A.M.It is very kind of you to meet me so early in the morning!
Thank you
I hope to improve my English when I come to London.
See you soon,and Happy New Year!
Fernando
注：既然是巴西最大城市,所以我把城市纠正为圣保罗了.巴西是讲葡萄牙语,所以写信者名字也改为费尔南多.
It is now only two weeks left then I will be there with you,I cannot believe it!I am looking forward very much to stay with you and your family,and to see London for the first time.I'm very excited.
My city,St.Paul is the biggest and noisiest city in Brazil.It is not so nice for tourists and is more commercial.It has very heavy traffic and pollution,maybe London is the same.What I like here in St.Paul is the entertainment; you can find lots of fans and good restaurants which is not close until the last customer has left.
My friend John visited London last year and he has been to the theatre to see the Buddy Holly story,he told me it was wonderful,I'd like to see it as well.
My Flight will land at Heathrow terminal 3 at 6:30 A.M.It is very kind of you to meet me so early in the morning!
Thank you
I hope to improve my English when I come to London.
See you soon,and Happy New Year!
Fernando
注：既然是巴西最大城市,所以我把城市纠正为圣保罗了.巴西是讲葡萄牙语,所以写信者名字也改为费尔南多.