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先帮我看看以下文字有没有问题、
The two days' weekend is really valuable to the people who are busy with work and study . Every one has their own way to spend weekends. Such as listen to music ,go to a movie , play basketball and so on. My weekends'life is also rich and colourful.
作文题目是这样的、周末两天时间的休息对于平时忙于工作和学习的人来说是非常宝贵的。每个人都有自己度周末生活的方式，比如听音乐，看电影，打篮球等。而我的周末生活也是丰富多彩的。
比如1、和家人或朋友在一起；
2、和父母去拜访他们的老朋友；
3、去图书馆学习或借书以增长知识、
4、看展览以开阔视野、
5、游览名胜古迹。
请根据以上的内容写一篇题为Weekends的短文、
120词左右
请大家看看有没有语法错误、
并且把以上的文字翻译、
不要用翻译器、
先谢谢大家啦、
(*^__^*)
先帮我看看以下文字有没有问题、
The two days' weekend is really valuable to the people who are busy with work and study . Every one has their own way to spend weekends. Such as listen to music ,go to a movie , play basketball and so on. My weekends'life is also rich and colourful.
作文题目是这样的、周末两天时间的休息对于平时忙于工作和学习的人来说是非常宝贵的。每个人都有自己度周末生活的方式，比如听音乐，看电影，打篮球等。而我的周末生活也是丰富多彩的。
比如1、和家人或朋友在一起；
2、和父母去拜访他们的老朋友；
3、去图书馆学习或借书以增长知识、
4、看展览以开阔视野、
5、游览名胜古迹。
请根据以上的内容写一篇题为Weekends的短文、
120词左右
请大家看看有没有语法错误、
并且把以上的文字翻译、
不要用翻译器、
先谢谢大家啦、
(*^__^*)
1. The two days' weekend (第一次提到不必特指，不用the；也不是属于 day 的weekend，用所有格形式是错误的；应该改为 a two-day weekend)
2. is really valuable to the people （to 意思是朝向、对着，不含“对于”之意，应该改为 for; 应该对任何人[people]都有价值，并非只对特定的人[the people}；此处改为 for people ）
3. who are busy with work and study (这里的work and study 正应该是特定的，因为指的是前面提到的 people，所以要加上 their ).
4. Every one has their own way to spend weekends. （正确）
5. Such as listen to music ,go to a movie , play basketball and so on. （1. such 要小写； 2. 并列的动词短语是与不定式 to spend weekends，所以第一个最好改为 to listen to the music，注意：表示音乐的名次前要有the。）.
6. My weekends'life is also rich and colourful. （理论上讲么有语法错误，但有瑕疵，最好用My weekend's life ）
Fist of all, after busy workdays, I always feel happy to be ab le to get together with my family at last to reunite for our dinner while chatting.
It is hard to come by to accompany my parents to do want they have long for all the time. Taking advantage of the weekend, I can lead them to pay a visit to their old friend whom they have been missed for long.
Besides, I prefer reading to seeing a film. Weekends are my golden hours to sit in the library, sink into the books, and hang round the rich knowledge.
Apart from reading, I like to go to the museum and around the places of historical interest and scenic beauty to widen my field of vision..
In all, I always have a wonderful time on my weekends 、
5、游览名胜古迹。
2. is really valuable to the people （to 意思是朝向、对着，不含“对于”之意，应该改为 for; 应该对任何人[people]都有价值，并非只对特定的人[the people}；此处改为 for people ）
3. who are busy with work and study (这里的work and study 正应该是特定的，因为指的是前面提到的 people，所以要加上 their ).
4. Every one has their own way to spend weekends. （正确）
5. Such as listen to music ,go to a movie , play basketball and so on. （1. such 要小写； 2. 并列的动词短语是与不定式 to spend weekends，所以第一个最好改为 to listen to the music，注意：表示音乐的名次前要有the。）.
6. My weekends'life is also rich and colourful. （理论上讲么有语法错误，但有瑕疵，最好用My weekend's life ）
Fist of all, after busy workdays, I always feel happy to be ab le to get together with my family at last to reunite for our dinner while chatting.
It is hard to come by to accompany my parents to do want they have long for all the time. Taking advantage of the weekend, I can lead them to pay a visit to their old friend whom they have been missed for long.
Besides, I prefer reading to seeing a film. Weekends are my golden hours to sit in the library, sink into the books, and hang round the rich knowledge.
Apart from reading, I like to go to the museum and around the places of historical interest and scenic beauty to widen my field of vision..
In all, I always have a wonderful time on my weekends 、
5、游览名胜古迹。