英语翻译Dear bear：How time flies,I still remember the day that I

英语翻译
Dear bear：
How time flies,I still remember the day that I first met you.At that time,when I was hearing someone new coming to our class,I was so excited and couldn't wait to see who it was.when I saw you,I just began to pay attention to you,although you didn't know,As time went by,finally we got together,how magical it was.
But unluckily,this summer we are going to say goodbye to each other,I know this can't be our ending,because there is a promise between us,I have ever said I'm not a good boy because I can't make you feel the happiness...
Lao Shi said if you wanted to keep a habit,you must keep it doing for at least three months.maybe I can keep the habit to be used to caring about you.
step by step,I still look for the way to your heart.Do you know...
I'm so sorry that I have done nothing for you,I just can give you the best wishes and memories,I know you are always forgetful,but please remember me forever,whatever happens,you're the first one I can't forget...
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My words are poor,so what.
When I want to give up,but after thinking,I always tell myself that don't give up,because something loses and never turns back.so.
In the end,nothing to say?but do yourself is ok.I just will be with you until you don't like me.I'm so lucky that I meet you.
This summer isn't hotter than before,but but but.
My tears are fulled with my eyes.I feel like just a girl.I'm not so strong you think...
F...You have ever told me you would write to me every week,but.maybe we can't do it anymore.
初三的英语水平、

1.首先标点几乎全错,因为英文标点符号后要空一格的,如“At that time,when...":
2.i was hearing是错的,只能说was listening to因为listen是在听,hear是听到了,是结果不能正在进行；
3.was so excited个人觉得有点夸张,不符合西方人的逻辑,从来没见过不认识不了解,用这样的词不太好,可以用was so curious好奇
4.magical魔法般的不好,wonderful或者miraculous奇妙比较好/
5.this wouldn't be our ending
6.keep the habit to be used to caring about you太重复habit跟be used to意思重复,keep the habit of caring about you
7.When I want to give up,I always tell myself that I shouldn't give up,because something loses and never turns back,so.
8.be yourself is OK
9.that I met you
10.My eyes are filled with tears.not as strong as you might think
可以把所有的ever去掉
祝你们友谊地久天长!All the Bless!