大师作文网英语高手请帮我看一下有没有语法错误!急
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英语高手请帮我看一下有没有语法错误!急
我们是一家年轻富有活力和创造力的企业,我们集设计与制造于一体,在一些
柔性的材料中融入我们的思考和创意来为客户提供好的产品,用以赢得共同的发展,
我们拥有灵活的经营机制,借鉴成功企业的管理体制、完善的发展规划以及不断改
进和更新的产品计划,我们更拥有一套吸收客户及市场意见的改进措施.我们坚信,
伴随着我们的共同努力,我们会与我们的客户、市场共同进步和稳定发展.
we are a young compay that is full of vitality and creativity.We Collection(converge) design and manufacture to become one .we provide the good products that put our consider and originality into flexibility material for customers.( we provide customers with the good products that put our consider and originality into flexibility material ).we possess flexible of operating mechanism of enterprises
we learn management system,perfect development planning ,incessant renew and improve on products planning from successful enterprises.We also have a improved measures ,that Soak up opinion and new information from customers and market.We have great confidence that with our joint effort,we will be(promote) common progress and steady development with our customers and market.
如果有错误请帮我改正一下,
我们是一家年轻富有活力和创造力的企业,我们集设计与制造于一体,在一些
柔性的材料中融入我们的思考和创意来为客户提供好的产品,用以赢得共同的发展,
我们拥有灵活的经营机制,借鉴成功企业的管理体制、完善的发展规划以及不断改
进和更新的产品计划,我们更拥有一套吸收客户及市场意见的改进措施.我们坚信,
伴随着我们的共同努力,我们会与我们的客户、市场共同进步和稳定发展.
we are a young compay that is full of vitality and creativity.We Collection(converge) design and manufacture to become one .we provide the good products that put our consider and originality into flexibility material for customers.( we provide customers with the good products that put our consider and originality into flexibility material ).we possess flexible of operating mechanism of enterprises
we learn management system,perfect development planning ,incessant renew and improve on products planning from successful enterprises.We also have a improved measures ,that Soak up opinion and new information from customers and market.We have great confidence that with our joint effort,we will be(promote) common progress and steady development with our customers and market.
如果有错误请帮我改正一下,
可以肯定的只有这两处,有些句子有些奇怪,没把握译好,留待高人解决
the good products that put our consider and originality into flexibility material for customers融入我们的思考和创意的产品应该用被动,是产品被融入我们的思考和创意,即the good products that are put our consider and originality into flexibility material for customers
We also have a improved measures a和measures有矛盾
the good products that put our consider and originality into flexibility material for customers融入我们的思考和创意的产品应该用被动,是产品被融入我们的思考和创意,即the good products that are put our consider and originality into flexibility material for customers
We also have a improved measures a和measures有矛盾