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From our recent survey of students ,We have found that 8% students enjoy reading.The humour book which reading of 28% of the students is most popular in high school.This is followed by a travel book.Next to is sports books which is16% of students like.12% of students are like a science book.And 10% students are like a history book.A small number of students like other kinds of books,such as a scary book.
We want to get the interested in reading.For this reason ,we suggest the school must development students in reading.The school library will buy some humour books and a travel book to reading by students,because They are the most popular kinds of books in school.At the same time the school also should buy the other kind of book reading .Enjoy reading ,students will get progress in the study.So the school should keep the library opening longer than before and do ideological work with students well.
大意就是说一个表 然后得出结论然后采取的措施 我用机翻的 呃 请专业人士改一改.
From our recent survey of students ,We have found that 8% students enjoy reading.The humour book which reading of 28% of the students is most popular in high school.This is followed by a travel book.Next to is sports books which is16% of students like.12% of students are like a science book.And 10% students are like a history book.A small number of students like other kinds of books,such as a scary book.
We want to get the interested in reading.For this reason ,we suggest the school must development students in reading.The school library will buy some humour books and a travel book to reading by students,because They are the most popular kinds of books in school.At the same time the school also should buy the other kind of book reading .Enjoy reading ,students will get progress in the study.So the school should keep the library opening longer than before and do ideological work with students well.
大意就是说一个表 然后得出结论然后采取的措施 我用机翻的 呃 请专业人士改一改.
The results of our recent survey indicate that 8% of students enjoy reading. Humour, accounting for 28% of the votes, trumps travel as the high school students' favorite genre. In third place is sports, with 16%. 12% like science, and 10% are for history. A small percentage prefer other genres, such as horror.
We want to get the students interested in reading. For this reason, we recommend that the school provide students with the conditions that would acclimate them to read more frequently. The school library could purchase some humour and travel books, since such are are the most popular reads among the students. At the same time, the school should invest in other tomes as well. An interest in reading cultivates a greater potential for academic progress. So, the library should have longer hours and do ideological work with students as well.
请问你的ideological work指的是?
我改的简练了点,句型和词汇高级些.建议你写个收尾的部分...
再问： 汗汗汗 我看不懂。 能不能简单一点。
再答： Our recent survey shows that 8% of students enjoy reading. Humour, grabbing 28% of the votes, beats travel as the high school students' favorite genre. In third place is sports, with 16%. 12% like science, and 10% are for history. A small number of students prefer other genres, such as horror. We want to get students interested in reading. For this reason, we recommend that the school provide an environment that can encourage students to read more frequently. The school library could buy some humour and travel books, since such are are the most popular reads among the students. At the same time, the school should invest in other kinds of books as well. Students who enjoy reading make better progress in their studies. So, the library should have longer hours and do ideological work with students as well. 难一点的词基本都改了，除了genre，这个实在没有好的近义词，反正意思就是书的类别。 如果还有什么不懂的地方，请详细点追问可以么？谢谢。 另外你原文里ideological work那里是指什么？
再问： 谢谢你这么细心阿~ 其实我也不知道那个是什么意思 因为 呃 我是用机翻的。 貌似是思想工作吧 啊哈哈~ 麻烦你了。
再答： 那最后一句这么改好了：So, the library should have longer hours and spend time helping students get the most out of what they read. 你看看整体还行么？还有没有什么不好的地方？
We want to get the students interested in reading. For this reason, we recommend that the school provide students with the conditions that would acclimate them to read more frequently. The school library could purchase some humour and travel books, since such are are the most popular reads among the students. At the same time, the school should invest in other tomes as well. An interest in reading cultivates a greater potential for academic progress. So, the library should have longer hours and do ideological work with students as well.
请问你的ideological work指的是?
我改的简练了点,句型和词汇高级些.建议你写个收尾的部分...
再问： 汗汗汗 我看不懂。 能不能简单一点。
再答： Our recent survey shows that 8% of students enjoy reading. Humour, grabbing 28% of the votes, beats travel as the high school students' favorite genre. In third place is sports, with 16%. 12% like science, and 10% are for history. A small number of students prefer other genres, such as horror. We want to get students interested in reading. For this reason, we recommend that the school provide an environment that can encourage students to read more frequently. The school library could buy some humour and travel books, since such are are the most popular reads among the students. At the same time, the school should invest in other kinds of books as well. Students who enjoy reading make better progress in their studies. So, the library should have longer hours and do ideological work with students as well. 难一点的词基本都改了，除了genre，这个实在没有好的近义词，反正意思就是书的类别。 如果还有什么不懂的地方，请详细点追问可以么？谢谢。 另外你原文里ideological work那里是指什么？
再问： 谢谢你这么细心阿~ 其实我也不知道那个是什么意思 因为 呃 我是用机翻的。 貌似是思想工作吧 啊哈哈~ 麻烦你了。
再答： 那最后一句这么改好了：So, the library should have longer hours and spend time helping students get the most out of what they read. 你看看整体还行么？还有没有什么不好的地方？