短文改错,十处错误,在线等
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短文改错,十处错误,在线等
I still remember my middle school life in that small town.I am then in a school for students from Tibet.As we all left home at a early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life.We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us.However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly.We enjoyed our happy life.At weekends, we would play basketball, swam in the pool or go for a picnic.We are lived in a big family.We treated each other brothers and sisters.If any one of us had any difficulty with his studies, the other student would help him out.It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as never before.
I still remember my middle school life in that small town.I am then in a school for students from Tibet.As we all left home at a early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life.We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us.However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly.We enjoyed our happy life.At weekends, we would play basketball, swam in the pool or go for a picnic.We are lived in a big family.We treated each other brothers and sisters.If any one of us had any difficulty with his studies, the other student would help him out.It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as never before.
1、I still remember my middle school life in that small town.I am(was) then in a school for students from Tibet.As we all left home at a(去掉) early age,we met lots of problems in our daily life.We had to do the washing,cleaning and shopping by us.
2、However,we seldom felt lonely or helplessly(helpless和前一形容词一致做表语).We enjoyed our happy life.At weekends,we would play basketall,swam(swim省略了谓语中的would) in the pool or go for a picnic.
3、We are lived (living用现在分词构成进行时)in a big family.We treated each other (加上as) brothers and sisters.
4、If any one of us had any difficulty with his studies,the other student (students因为the other修饰复数名词)would help him out.
5、It has been five years when(since) we graduated,but those memories are as sweet as never (去掉never)before.
2、However,we seldom felt lonely or helplessly(helpless和前一形容词一致做表语).We enjoyed our happy life.At weekends,we would play basketall,swam(swim省略了谓语中的would) in the pool or go for a picnic.
3、We are lived (living用现在分词构成进行时)in a big family.We treated each other (加上as) brothers and sisters.
4、If any one of us had any difficulty with his studies,the other student (students因为the other修饰复数名词)would help him out.
5、It has been five years when(since) we graduated,but those memories are as sweet as never (去掉never)before.