大师作文网帮我的把英语文章修改语法,不长,
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帮我的把英语文章修改语法,不长,
Good morning everyone.
My speech today is entitled "Fairy Tales"
Everyone likes a fairy tale childhood.
"Snow White" "The Frog Prince" are all like,
But when we grow up,the more we do not like fairy tales,and we think that is unrealistic.Everyone is a princess,too,which do not come to the prince.In this way,we are farther and farther away from the fairy tale.
In fact,children should be accompanied by a person's life.Walt Disney once said:fairy tales are for everyone,whether we be six or sixty.Please always maintain a childlike innocence.
So,no matter whether you still like fairy tales,but please always keep a childlike innocence,it will make you forever young and happy
大概意思是：
大家早上好.
我今天要演讲的题目是“童话”
每个人小时候都喜欢童话故事.
《白雪公主》《青蛙王子》都是大家喜欢的,
可是当我们长大后我们越来越不喜欢童话了,我们认为那是不现实的.每个人都不是公主,也等不来王子.就这样,我们离童话越来越远了.
其实,童话应该伴随一个人的一生.华特 迪士尼说过：童话是给所有人的,whether we be six or sixty.请永远保持一颗童心.
所以,不管你现在是否还喜欢童话,但请永远保持一颗童心,它会使你永远年轻快乐
希望各位帮我修改修改语法,我知道错了很多,然后如果有可以添加的也请帮我加一点点,
Good morning everyone.
My speech today is entitled "Fairy Tales"
Everyone likes a fairy tale childhood.
"Snow White" "The Frog Prince" are all like,
But when we grow up,the more we do not like fairy tales,and we think that is unrealistic.Everyone is a princess,too,which do not come to the prince.In this way,we are farther and farther away from the fairy tale.
In fact,children should be accompanied by a person's life.Walt Disney once said:fairy tales are for everyone,whether we be six or sixty.Please always maintain a childlike innocence.
So,no matter whether you still like fairy tales,but please always keep a childlike innocence,it will make you forever young and happy
大概意思是：
大家早上好.
我今天要演讲的题目是“童话”
每个人小时候都喜欢童话故事.
《白雪公主》《青蛙王子》都是大家喜欢的,
可是当我们长大后我们越来越不喜欢童话了,我们认为那是不现实的.每个人都不是公主,也等不来王子.就这样,我们离童话越来越远了.
其实,童话应该伴随一个人的一生.华特 迪士尼说过：童话是给所有人的,whether we be six or sixty.请永远保持一颗童心.
所以,不管你现在是否还喜欢童话,但请永远保持一颗童心,它会使你永远年轻快乐
希望各位帮我修改修改语法,我知道错了很多,然后如果有可以添加的也请帮我加一点点,
我是英语过专八学生.基于演讲不需要太难太深的英语,口语化,通俗易懂就好,尽量采用短句.
你的中文写得不错,短小精悍,发人深思,很好.我翻译的过程中都有了些感慨.
根据你的中文修改的,补充了一句,让文章显得更丰满些.
Good morning everyone.
My topic is “ Fairy Tales”.
Everyone likes fairy tales in his childhood,such as Snow White and The Frog Prince.We were used to falling asleep by listen to the fairy tales.Even after we can read,we read the fairy tales by ourselves.
However,after we grow up,we don’t like fairy tales any more.We think they’re unreal,they can not be true.We’re not princess,and the prince will not come.Therefore,we become far away from fairy tales day by day.
In my opinion,fairy tales should go with one’s whole life.Walt Disney once said,fairy tales are for everyone,whether we are six or sixty.Therefore,please hold a child’s heart.
No matter whether you like fairy tales or not,please hold a child’s heart,which will keep you young and happy forever.
你的中文写得不错,短小精悍,发人深思,很好.我翻译的过程中都有了些感慨.
根据你的中文修改的,补充了一句,让文章显得更丰满些.
Good morning everyone.
My topic is “ Fairy Tales”.
Everyone likes fairy tales in his childhood,such as Snow White and The Frog Prince.We were used to falling asleep by listen to the fairy tales.Even after we can read,we read the fairy tales by ourselves.
However,after we grow up,we don’t like fairy tales any more.We think they’re unreal,they can not be true.We’re not princess,and the prince will not come.Therefore,we become far away from fairy tales day by day.
In my opinion,fairy tales should go with one’s whole life.Walt Disney once said,fairy tales are for everyone,whether we are six or sixty.Therefore,please hold a child’s heart.
No matter whether you like fairy tales or not,please hold a child’s heart,which will keep you young and happy forever.