大师作文网帮我修改一下英语的句子和语法
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帮我修改一下英语的句子和语法
哪位帮我修改一下下面的这段英语有没有语法上的错误,
It is my live,but without you.How is it?i can't answer.i love you over all the things what i can see and what i can feel,even over my live.But,in my live,there is only me.i can see everything but not the girl who i love.You were my best dream but also my worst dream what i everynight have.i'm waiting for you like i'm waiting for the end of my live.
哪位帮我修改一下下面的这段英语有没有语法上的错误,
It is my live,but without you.How is it?i can't answer.i love you over all the things what i can see and what i can feel,even over my live.But,in my live,there is only me.i can see everything but not the girl who i love.You were my best dream but also my worst dream what i everynight have.i'm waiting for you like i'm waiting for the end of my live.
I have my life,but I don't have you.How is that?I have no answer.I love you more than anything I see and feel,more than my own life.But in my life there's just me.I have everything but (you) the girl I love.You were my loveliest dream and also my every night's nightmare.I'll be waiting for you till the end of my life./until the day that I die./ as long as I live.