求英文达人改错1.Do you think personal success is the most important

求英文达人改错
1.Do you think personal success is the most important thing in your life?
I asked whether personal success was the most important thing in their life.
2.If not,what is the most important thing in your life?
I was interested in what the most important thing was in their life if not.
3.Will you do some charitable act if someday you succeed?
I continued to ask whether they would did some charitable act if someday they succeeded.
4.If yes,which is more important,charitable act or enjoying your life?
I wanted to know which more important thing was,charitable act or enjoying their life,if yes.
5.Did you do everything in order?
I inquired whether they did everything in order.
6.Will you plan your everyday?
I asked whether they planned their everyday.
7.What is the most different tradition from the other country?
I questioned them about what the most different tradition was from the other country.
8.Which kind of job do you want to do in the future?
I was curious about which kind of job did they wanted to do in the future.
9.What is your favorite food except American Food?
I surveyed them about what their favorite food was except American food.
10.What is your favorite sport or game?
I asked what their favorite sport or game was.

1
I asked whether personal success is the most important thing in their life.
2
I was interested in what the most important thing is in their life if not.
3
I continued to ask whether they would do some charitable act if someday they succeed.
4
I wanted to know which is more important,charitable act or enjoying their life,if yes.
5
I inquired whether they do everything in order.
6
I asked whether they would plan their everyday.
7
I questioned them about what the most different tradition is from the other country.
8
I was curious about which kind of job they would want to do in the future.
9
I surveyed them about what their favorite food is except American food.
10
I asked what their favorite sport or game is.