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帮忙看一下我写的小短文,看看有没问题.
Holle everyone!I am very happy to introduce myself here.My name is xxx.as you can see,i am a girl.I‘m sixteen years old.I graduated from no.5 school.I like piay badminton.But i can't piay it well.I also like wach TV、listen to music.I think i must to work hard.Last but no list,i hope we can get alone well.That's all.Thanks for you listening.
帮忙看一下我写的小短文,看看有没问题.
Hello写错了
I like playing badminton
like watching TV,listening to the music
我觉得我可以努力的工作,不能这样表达,你可以 I think I can work hard
Last but no list?我不太明白,没见过,如果你想表达最后的话,可以用at last
和某人相处融洽应该是get along well with sb,而不是你写的.