大师作文网英语短文求帮忙看看语法有什么问题
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英语短文求帮忙看看语法有什么问题
Hello,everyone!My name is xxx,I'm xx years old.I'm sunny girl.I like to help people in need of help.I'm very happy that I can study in xxx experimental school,also can and everybody study together in xx class.My hobby is painting and photography.这些帮我看看有没有什么问题，还有“请多多关照”和“我希望能在初中取得更好的成绩”怎么说？
Hello,everyone!My name is xxx,I'm xx years old.I'm sunny girl.I like to help people in need of help.I'm very happy that I can study in xxx experimental school,also can and everybody study together in xx class.My hobby is painting and photography.这些帮我看看有没有什么问题，还有“请多多关照”和“我希望能在初中取得更好的成绩”怎么说？
Hello, everyone! My name is xxx, I'm xx years old. I'm （a）sunny girl. I like to help people (who are) in need of help. I'm very happy that I can study in xxx experimental school, also can (meet) everybody and study together here in xx class. My hobby is painting and photography. (I hope to be one of your friends. Also, I want to study well and to gain good grades in the middle school period. I hope that you will help me. Thank you!)
（写得不错， 但是加入括号里的字句就更加完美了。）
（写得不错， 但是加入括号里的字句就更加完美了。）