大师作文网有谁英语好一点的帮我看看,
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有谁英语好一点的帮我看看,
我写了一些话,想知道写的对不对.Areyou busy now!Sorry for my late reply.I was very busy in Hangzhou.Iwent to hospital for physical examination almost every day.I think that add income for hospital.Haha…On August,I gave birth to a baby boy.He is lovely and naughty.I send the picture to you (in theattachment).I will work next year.For baby,I am very happy although busy.Thelast letter,we are talk about fig.the fig is green colorin the picture.We have red fig too.The red fig is nice than the green color.
我写了一些话,想知道写的对不对.Areyou busy now!Sorry for my late reply.I was very busy in Hangzhou.Iwent to hospital for physical examination almost every day.I think that add income for hospital.Haha…On August,I gave birth to a baby boy.He is lovely and naughty.I send the picture to you (in theattachment).I will work next year.For baby,I am very happy although busy.Thelast letter,we are talk about fig.the fig is green colorin the picture.We have red fig too.The red fig is nice than the green color.
基本上还算不错啦.不过还是要提出以下几点：一、第二句话读起来觉得有点别扭,改成这样会好一点 I am sorry for that I have not respond promptly.（我为我没有及时回复你而感到抱歉） 再后面一句,为什么要用过去式呢?这应该是表示一直以来的状态,要用一般现在时嘛.I'm very busy in Hangzhou.二、第三句的那个physical不必要.I gave birth to a baby boy.这句中的baby与boy重复,应该去掉baby.三、 I am very happy although busy.这句中的although busy要放到前面.四、the fig is green colorin the picture中的color 不要.五、We have red fig too.The red fig is nice than the green color.have 后面加冠词a,最后一个color改成fig.希望对你能有所帮助.