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A boy always make mistakes.He often play basketball and computer games.He don't like study.But he can't study. Because he not want have a bad job. so he only can study. This is me,a question boy. I have short black hair and I'm very tall. But I'm not very fat. There are three people in my family,They are my father mother and me,I often watch TV with my family at night on sunday.Sometimes we are playing basketball in front of my gate, So I have a happy family. If you want be friend with me.I'm very welcome
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解题过程：
A boy always makes mistakes.He often plays basketball and computer games.He doesn't like studying.But he has to study. Because he doesn't want to have a bad job. so he has to study.
This is me,a question boy.
I have short black hair and I'm very tall. But I'm not very fat.
There are three people in my family,They are my father mother and me,I often watch TV with my family at night on Sunday.Sometimes we play asketball in front of my gate, So I have a happy family.
If you want to be friends with me.I'm very happy.
很高兴为你评改作文，你的这篇作文写得不错哦，结构完整，条理清楚，但里面有部分语病，里面的一些语病你是自己能改过来的。记住写完作文以后，一定要学会自己修改语病。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
A boy always makes mistakes.He often plays basketball and computer games.He doesn't like studying.But he has to study. Because he doesn't want to have a bad job. so he has to study.
This is me,a question boy.
I have short black hair and I'm very tall. But I'm not very fat.
There are three people in my family,They are my father mother and me,I often watch TV with my family at night on Sunday.Sometimes we play asketball in front of my gate, So I have a happy family.
If you want to be friends with me.I'm very happy.
很高兴为你评改作文，你的这篇作文写得不错哦，结构完整，条理清楚，但里面有部分语病，里面的一些语病你是自己能改过来的。记住写完作文以后，一定要学会自己修改语病。
最终答案：略