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My Invention
I want to invent a robot named Dr.Jack.His main duty is see patient.He is very kind and have supert meclical skill.Because in today,many people died of illness.Many illness such as cancer that doctors can't deal with them.But in the future,the Dr.Jack can deal with them.People won't worry about the illness no longer.
Save people's life is doctors' duty.Dr.Jack can do it well.And he will not produce the pollute.I think he will be a great and popular robot.Every dody all like he.And I know it's only one of my dream.But I will try my best to study hard to invent.Because Dr.Jack is not only my dream,but also all of ours dream.
My Invention
I want to invent a robot named Dr.Jack.His main duty is see patient.He is very kind and have supert meclical skill.Because in today,many people died of illness.Many illness such as cancer that doctors can't deal with them.But in the future,the Dr.Jack can deal with them.People won't worry about the illness no longer.
Save people's life is doctors' duty.Dr.Jack can do it well.And he will not produce the pollute.I think he will be a great and popular robot.Every dody all like he.And I know it's only one of my dream.But I will try my best to study hard to invent.Because Dr.Jack is not only my dream,but also all of ours dream.
可以修正的地方有
1.His main duty is see patient 改成 His main duty is to see patient,原因：is后面的动词要么用to do表示目的 要么用ing表示进行,你应该是要表目的吧.
2.have supert meclical skill 改成has super meclical skill.原因：第三人称单数.super单词拼错、
3.Save people's life is doctors' duty改成Saving people's life is doctors' duty 原因 ：动词作主语要ing
4.he will not produce the pollute 改成he will not produce the pollution.原因 要用名词pollution.
5.关于你问的那个no longer 和any longer的区别：只能这样说 no longer =not any longer 所以你那个要改成 any longer 因为你前面有个not.如果要用 no longer的话 应该是这样People will no longer worry about the illness.
6.还有你问的那个动词是第一个的时候在什么情况下做原型,是在祈使句的时候.比如.Attention please!没有谓语.当有了谓语动词的时候就要加ing了
用心修改
1.His main duty is see patient 改成 His main duty is to see patient,原因：is后面的动词要么用to do表示目的 要么用ing表示进行,你应该是要表目的吧.
2.have supert meclical skill 改成has super meclical skill.原因：第三人称单数.super单词拼错、
3.Save people's life is doctors' duty改成Saving people's life is doctors' duty 原因 ：动词作主语要ing
4.he will not produce the pollute 改成he will not produce the pollution.原因 要用名词pollution.
5.关于你问的那个no longer 和any longer的区别：只能这样说 no longer =not any longer 所以你那个要改成 any longer 因为你前面有个not.如果要用 no longer的话 应该是这样People will no longer worry about the illness.
6.还有你问的那个动词是第一个的时候在什么情况下做原型,是在祈使句的时候.比如.Attention please!没有谓语.当有了谓语动词的时候就要加ing了
用心修改