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帮忙检查一下我的这篇英语作文,我是初三的,刚开学一个星期,所以有错的话不要换一些难懂的单词,

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帮忙检查一下我的这篇英语作文,我是初三的,刚开学一个星期,所以有错的话不要换一些难懂的单词,
The population of China is about 1.3 billion and it has the largest population in world,so we can see the people everywhere.Becaus of the large population ,there is less and less living space for each family.We are short food and energy.People find job is more diffcult than before and also causes many other diffculties for the whole nation.The largepopulation cause many problems not only in the city but also in the countryside.In order to deal with these problems,the government carry out the one-chlid policy and has work well incontroing the population.
帮忙检查一下我的这篇英语作文,我是初三的,刚开学一个星期,所以有错的话不要换一些难懂的单词,
第一排:in the world;
第二排:建议将第一个the换成Chinese;注意because的拼写;
第三排:be short of意为“缺少”,别忘了of;People find jobs前加that(主语从句);also causes前加it;
第四排:/;
第五排:/;
第六排:has worked well 前加it.
祝学习愉快,
再问: People find jobs前加that(主语从句) 怎么加???是这样吗:That People find jobs
再答: 是的,这样就构成了主语从句。。。(不太明白的话,请百度一下“主语从句”,希望对你有帮助)