英语作文在线点评修改一下我的作文:My dream lifein the future ,i will be very
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英语作文在线点评
修改一下我的作文:My dream life
in the future ,i will be very beautiful .i will go to work by car so i will be very happen everyday .i will live in a big and elegant house with my parents ,in my home,has a robort,it will be do dull jobs everyday .On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.Go to there is my dream.What about you?
修改一下我的作文:My dream life
in the future ,i will be very beautiful .i will go to work by car so i will be very happen everyday .i will live in a big and elegant house with my parents ,in my home,has a robort,it will be do dull jobs everyday .On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.Go to there is my dream.What about you?
happen everyday 改为:happy every day 每天很快乐( everyday每日的)
in my home,has a robort改为:There will be a robot in my house.= There is going to be a robot in my house.= We will have a robot in my house.
it will be do dull jobs everyday 改为:It will do dull jobs for us every day.( will + 动词原形,be/ do 不能用在一起)
On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.-改为:We'll go to Sydney Opera House to spend our holiday.或者用:During our holiday,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.
Go to there is my dream改为:Going there is my dream.( 用动名词做主语,there前省略to) 或者改为:Because I am looking forward to going there for a long time.
in my home,has a robort改为:There will be a robot in my house.= There is going to be a robot in my house.= We will have a robot in my house.
it will be do dull jobs everyday 改为:It will do dull jobs for us every day.( will + 动词原形,be/ do 不能用在一起)
On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.-改为:We'll go to Sydney Opera House to spend our holiday.或者用:During our holiday,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.
Go to there is my dream改为:Going there is my dream.( 用动名词做主语,there前省略to) 或者改为:Because I am looking forward to going there for a long time.
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