大师作文网求改作文（英文）主要改下语法,时态之类的：As the vividly drawing is shown ,a youn
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求改作文（英文）
主要改下语法,时态之类的：
As the vividly drawing is shown ,a young man has a name of beckham on his face,and another man has a hair style which is the same as beckham.this thought-provoking picture illustrates that superstar has a huge influence on the youngs.
The influence from superstar can have a good effect on the youngs,if the superstar's social activity is positive and helpful to the youngs,and the youngs will accept it more easily,because they love their star,and follow them.so the superstar should take the duty to lead the youngs to bright future.on the contrary,if the superstar can not show their social duty,or even break it,which will have a bad effect on the society ,especially to youngs.
Above all,superstar's behaviour is not just related to himself,but also have a directly effect on youngs,so they should have more social responsibilities to lead the youngs,and together we can make our society more harmonious.
主要改下语法,时态之类的：
As the vividly drawing is shown ,a young man has a name of beckham on his face,and another man has a hair style which is the same as beckham.this thought-provoking picture illustrates that superstar has a huge influence on the youngs.
The influence from superstar can have a good effect on the youngs,if the superstar's social activity is positive and helpful to the youngs,and the youngs will accept it more easily,because they love their star,and follow them.so the superstar should take the duty to lead the youngs to bright future.on the contrary,if the superstar can not show their social duty,or even break it,which will have a bad effect on the society ,especially to youngs.
Above all,superstar's behaviour is not just related to himself,but also have a directly effect on youngs,so they should have more social responsibilities to lead the youngs,and together we can make our society more harmonious.
As the vividly drawing showes ,a young man has the name of Beckham on his face,and another man has the same hair style with Beckham.This thought-provoking picture illustrates that super star has a huge influence on the youngs.
The influence of super star can affect the youngs in a good way if their social activity is positive and helpful,in addition,the youngs can accept it more easily,because they love their idol,and follow their activities.Thus,the superstar should take the responsbility to lead the youngs to bright future.
On the contrary,if the superstar can not obey their social duty,or even break it,then they will have bad effects on the society ,especially to the youngs.
Above all,superstar's behaviour is not just have effects on himself,but also have directly effects on the youngs,so they should take more social responsibilities to the youngs,and together we can make our society more harmonious.
注意每句开头大写,有一些用法不对,自己对一下我改了哪里吧.
好好学习天天向上.哈哈
The influence of super star can affect the youngs in a good way if their social activity is positive and helpful,in addition,the youngs can accept it more easily,because they love their idol,and follow their activities.Thus,the superstar should take the responsbility to lead the youngs to bright future.
On the contrary,if the superstar can not obey their social duty,or even break it,then they will have bad effects on the society ,especially to the youngs.
Above all,superstar's behaviour is not just have effects on himself,but also have directly effects on the youngs,so they should take more social responsibilities to the youngs,and together we can make our society more harmonious.
注意每句开头大写,有一些用法不对,自己对一下我改了哪里吧.
好好学习天天向上.哈哈
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