求改作文I have asked myself again and again "how to learn englis

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I have asked myself again and again "how to learn english well".For a long time ,i have no idea about that ,but now i understand practice makes perfect.And never give up ,I'm pretty sure that i have head down the right path.With the time past,my english level would be much better than today.
As we all know,we got to take efforts in learning if we want to become distinguished.
First of all,i do to calm down and think about what's my weak point of enghish ability.
Then,find out the reasons why i'm not good at that side.The toughest procedure is in the next,to settle down those problems.These is a constantly process and would be a long haul .If i can't insist,all the efforts i took will be in vain.It's just like we intend to build a bridge from a side of a river to the other side,but i quit on the half way .So i still can't cross the river .Moreover,i have to remind myself that haste makes waste .
Learning english step by step,i'll be fond of english one day.

整体感觉还不错,很流畅.个别句子还是可以修一修的.
I have asked myself again and again "how to learn english well".For a long time ,i have no idea about that ,but now i understand only practice makes perfect.(And never give up 这局有点生硬,建议删掉),I'm pretty sure that i have head down the right path.With the time past,my english (level 不必一一对应的写,english在这里已经可以表达英文水平了,没必要再用level) would be much better than today.
（As we all know,we got to take efforts in learning if we want to become distinguished.）
我的改写 As is well known,we got to spare no effort in learning if we want to become distinguished.个人感觉原句we用的太多,有些别扭,spare no effort 表示不遗余力,更漂亮一点.)
First of all,i （do to 不太懂这个用法,我水平有限欢迎指教,should就可以吧?） calm down and think about what's my weak point of enghish ability.
Then,find out （the reasons 有了定冠词,就不要用复数了） why i'm not good at that side.The toughest procedure is （in the next,这个也很别扭,建议删掉）to settle down those problems.（These is 单复数一直 this is）a constantly process and would be a long haul .If i can't insist,all the efforts i （took effort用make） will be in vain.（It's just like we intend to build a bridge from a side of a river to the other side,but i quit on the half way .So i still can't cross the river .这种写法好坏看法一向不一致,不过我还是挺欣赏的）Moreover,i have to remind myself that haste makes waste .
Learning english step by step,i'll be fond of english one day.（结尾有点弱,有点草草了事的感觉）