急求——————帮忙英文翻译一下.一定别有太多语病 【多运用比较级】

急求——————帮忙英文翻译一下.一定别有太多语病 【多运用比较级】
现在我们正在成长,成长就意味着我们会改变,这些改变可能是心智上的,也可能是身体上的,而这些点点滴滴的变化就寓意着我们越来越成熟.
我觉得我的心智越来越成熟.为什么我这么说呢?是因为第一：我看的书越来越多.以前我看书时只知道关注那些动人的故事情节,但现在会去琢磨那些令我欣赏的句子,并加以积累,在之后的学习中加以运用.第二：多注重生活中的细节.在每天的生活中有时可能是别人的一句话便成为自己在人生道路中必不可少的一个帮助,譬如习惯,学习方法,为人处事...而且越长大做事时关注的东西便会越多,要考虑好多个方面.可是我觉得这样会更有压力,至少这一点我现在还是不能理解的.第三：我觉得在我成长过程中对我影响最大的或者可以说是令我成熟起来最重要的一点就是包容,包容让我不再斤斤计较,让我觉得活着放松,让我可以放下烦恼去欣赏那些平时忽视的风景.还有一点也是至关重要的：就是转化思维.其实这很容易做到也很好理解.打个比方说；一个人向你借一样他急需的东西你不接,如果是你你管别人借一个东西他不借你,心里毕竟都会不好受,因为谁都不喜欢被拒绝,同理可证管你借东西的人也会不好受.所以我们做事时要多转化思维,不要老以自我为中心,不去考虑他人.而且现在倡导的就是合作,如果老闹矛盾如何去合作?
现在的我正在成长,有不足也有优点,所以便要取长补短,只有不断的进取才可让心智更加成熟!这就是越长的越成熟的我.

Now we are growing, growth means that we will change, these changes may be on the mind, also may be physical, and these little drops of the change is the significance of us more and more mature.
I think my mind more and more mature. Why do I say so? Because the first: I see of book more and more. I only know when reading a book before pay attention to those moving story, but will now go to ponder I appreciate those who make the sentence, and to accumulate, in the study after applied to. The second: notice more details in life. In everyday life sometimes may be a words of others will become himself in life, the essential a help, such as the habit, learning method, people doing things... And the work of concern grew up things will be more more, want to consider in many quarters. But I think it will have even more pressure, at least to this point I still can't understand. Third: I think when I was growing up in the process of I have the biggest impact on or we can say is that I mature the most important is inclusive, and tolerance make me not haggle over every ounce, let me feel alive to relax, let I can put down the trouble to appreciate those normally ignored scenery. And a little also is important: transformation is thinking. It is so easy to do is also very good understanding. For example say; A man as he borrowed from you in urgent need of things you don't pick up, if you are you mind other people borrow a thing he does not lend you, the in the mind will not be after all, because everyone don't like to be refused, so can you borrow things with the funny. So when we do things more thinking transformation, don't old self-centered, do not go to think about others. And now advocate is cooperation, if old make antinomy how to cooperate?
Now I was growing up, insufficient also have advantages, so that to complement each other, only by continuously enterprising just can make the mind more mature! This is the long, the more mature of I.