大师作文网大家帮忙在这段英语短文中找出10处错误并改正,
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大家帮忙在这段英语短文中找出10处错误并改正,
请大家在这篇短文中找出10处错误并改正,Mrs Brown is only 32 years old but is in a diet.She is a 120-kilogram heavily woman."You must not eat meat,sweets or cakes," her doctor said to her.Her husband promised that she will stop Mrs Brown made a mice big cake amd in a few minute she finished with it.Then she feared that her husband would angry.She made another cake quickly but couldn`t help eat half.When Mr Brown came back after having a walk,he saw the half cake left but was happy.
请大家在这篇短文中找出10处错误并改正,Mrs Brown is only 32 years old but is in a diet.She is a 120-kilogram heavily woman."You must not eat meat,sweets or cakes," her doctor said to her.Her husband promised that she will stop Mrs Brown made a mice big cake amd in a few minute she finished with it.Then she feared that her husband would angry.She made another cake quickly but couldn`t help eat half.When Mr Brown came back after having a walk,he saw the half cake left but was happy.
1.第一句不应该用but,上下文并无转折之意 2.第二句heavily,不对,应为heavy 3.must not,更改为need not 4.Her husband promised that she will--would 5.she finished with it,去掉with 6.husband would 加be angry 7.8.couldn`t help 加 to eat 加a half 后面的不看了