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帮忙修改一下英语作文,急,今天要交,语句希望可以通顺点,
标题:What Jobs Do College Graduates Want to Take
Directions:Occupation Male Female Teaching 5% 45% Managers 40% 15% Businessman 30% 25% Lawyers 15% 10% 1.目前大学毕业生的择业情况 2.男女学生就业选择的区别 3.我的观点
字数：120--150
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students.Boys are to some extent different from girls in their choice as is seen from the graph.
In the teaching profession,45% of girl students want to become teachers after graduation whereas only 5% of boys want to teach.
40% of boy students would like to become managers whereas only 15% of girls want to do.
For the love of doing business men and women is about the same.30% of men choose this profession,more than 5% of woman.
15% of men choose to do lawyer while 10% of girls preferring this profession.
Can see that women prefer a stable life and men prefer to make money.
I want to become teachers after graduation,because the teacher will teach people a lot of things
In my opinion,college graduates must lower the over-high expectations and apply for proper jobs
标题:What Jobs Do College Graduates Want to Take
Directions:Occupation Male Female Teaching 5% 45% Managers 40% 15% Businessman 30% 25% Lawyers 15% 10% 1.目前大学毕业生的择业情况 2.男女学生就业选择的区别 3.我的观点
字数：120--150
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students.Boys are to some extent different from girls in their choice as is seen from the graph.
In the teaching profession,45% of girl students want to become teachers after graduation whereas only 5% of boys want to teach.
40% of boy students would like to become managers whereas only 15% of girls want to do.
For the love of doing business men and women is about the same.30% of men choose this profession,more than 5% of woman.
15% of men choose to do lawyer while 10% of girls preferring this profession.
Can see that women prefer a stable life and men prefer to make money.
I want to become teachers after graduation,because the teacher will teach people a lot of things
In my opinion,college graduates must lower the over-high expectations and apply for proper jobs
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