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英语作文评析,重点找一下语法错误和拼写上的错误(小作文)

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英语作文评析,重点找一下语法错误和拼写上的错误(小作文)
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The Red Cross will give us a physical examination for next month.It will be held between 8:30 and 10:30,May 8.It will be held in our school.We should have no drinking or eating before the examination.We should having a bath and wearing clean clothes,too.We all welcome to everybody.If you want to come,please get ready for it and take good part in it.I hope you can learn something from it.
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Apirl 16th
英语作文评析,重点找一下语法错误和拼写上的错误(小作文)
一,第一句去掉for.像next month,this weekend此类时间短语在句子里作状语前面一般不加介词.二,第三行We should 后面having应为动词原形have,wearing应为wear,因为should是情态动词,后接动词原形三,We all welcome to everybody算是chinglish中式英语,建议改为Everybody is welcome.例如平常我们说的不客气You are welcome.四,建议句语句之间适当加些连接词,如and之类的就行,是文章显得像个整体,而不只是几个句子的罗列.个人浅见,相互学习哈.