还是一篇作文,帮我看下有没有什么错误的地方或者哪里的语句有更好的改进方法的~

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还是一篇作文,帮我看下有没有什么错误的地方或者哪里的语句有更好的改进方法的~
Time flies and when I realized it I have already been a sophomore.Looking back into the first year I have spent in the college,I can clearly found that I have really learned very much and grown quickly.
I can still remember the first several weeks in the college and they are quite busy and difficult to me.As a college student,I have to learn how to handle the life and work and study well.I know I should learn to do most of the things by myself.At that time I nearly lost myself.However,I tried to struggle and finally find a better way to balance my academic life.
During this year,I joined the school student union and took part into many activities.All of those made me realize that I can also do many things and my academic life can be colorful too.
Now as a student in grade two,I am still not sure what should be my life plan but I am sure I will still do my best and keep trying.Life is always full of challenges and I will be a good fighter.
这是一篇为口语考试准备的作文,额,要是有错就帮改下啊~不要尽发表些空话.有能力就改给我看.文章写着啊,大二
嗯,是一个关于“change”的口语演讲吧

Time has gone before I notice it. （You can also change it into ‘How time flies!’）Now I have already been a sophomore. I can still remember the first several weeks that I found very hard in this college. As a college student, I have to learn to cope with all kinds of difficulties both in life and study . I also know that I should get used to depending on myself in most cases.But frankly speaking,that is not easy at all.So at that time,I nearly lost my hope.But fortunately,I didn’t give up and i finally found a suitable way to enjoy my college life.And at this moment,I can proudly say that I have really grown to maturity.During the past one year,as you know,I have joined the student union and have taken part into colourful activities which benefited me a lot. All of these let me realize that how one can manage to deal with different problems . Now as a student in grade two,though I still haven’t made a perfect plan about my future, I am sure that I will do my best and keep going. Life is full of challenges ,but I have confidence in myself that I will be the man who laughs last.
(Wish you success!)
累死我了,咱打字又慢……
尽量忠于原文……
额……这篇行不?求奖励……

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