跪求英语短文,题目为《我的礼物》,口语比赛用!

跪求英语短文,题目为《我的礼物》,口语比赛用!
词数在100~200之间,

It was my birthday yesterday. I got a lot of gifts. All of themwere covered with coloured paper. Among them there were two interestingones.
My elder sister gave me a round paper bag and I thought it wasa football. BUt when I opened it, it turned out to be a clock. Mybrother gave me a message, saying that "My present has been put in yourbedroom. "As soon as I went into my bedroom, I found a box. I openedit and found a laptop. I was very happy.
These two presents aim to let me study hard and not to waste time.
昨天是我的生日,我收到了很多礼物.它们用彩纸包着,其中有两件有趣的东西.
我姐姐送了我一个圆纸包,开始我认为是个足球,但打开后才发现是一个闹钟.我哥给我留了张条,告诉我：“我的礼物已经放在你的卧室里了.”我走进卧室,发现一个盒子.我打开了它,里面是一台笔记本电脑.我非常高兴.
这两件礼物是为了让我好好学习,抓紧时间.
Yesterday was my birthday and I received a lot of presents.These presents were packed in coloured paper and two of them were funnyand interesting, which impressed me.
My sister sent a bag of present to me. The bag was big andround. I though it was a football. But when I opened it, I saw a clock.The other one was given by my brother. He left me a message, which said"my present is lying in your bedroom". When I got to my bedroom, Ifound a laptop. Oh!Great!＇ I jumped with joy. I know, they Want me tostudy hard and not to waste time.
I would never forget this birthday.
昨天是我的生日,我收到了许多生日礼物,并且这些礼物都用彩纸包着.其中两件礼物很好玩很有趣,给我留下了很深的印象.
我姐姐送给我一个包,这包又大又圆.我认为是足球,可打开一看是个闹钟.另外一件礼物是我哥哥送给我的,他给我留了一张纸条,上面写着：“我的礼物放在你的卧室里.”当我进入卧室时,我看到了一台笔记本电脑.噢!真是太棒了!我高兴地跳了起来-.我明白他们想让我努力学习,不要浪费时间.