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Dear daisy
Welcome to my hometown.this is a small town don't like changchun city just a small town.But this town's air is more clear than changchun city.My hometown was famous by leather.It's always attacts million people to went my hometown to buy leather products.
there are two hill in there.It's name is east hill and west hill.It was green in every seasons.It's beautiful in every seasons.Our home lives in the town of West.Distance from city centre is fifteen minutes' walk.Near my home there is a park.My parents was walked when after dinner.Chat with our neighbours.I think this is a nice time for my parents beacuse in the daytime they must earn money.They works in leather store.My hometown's leather store is biggest in the china.It's name is Haining China Leather City.You can buy everything and anything related to the leather.And my parents always work hard.They must pay millions of rent every year.
I in summer I often go to swimming with my friends.I'm good at swimming.But in changchun city so many people can't swim.I was very surprised for it.Then I know,the North City water shortage,and our province is famous by water.
this is somethings about my family and my hometown
give you best wishes
Dear daisy
Welcome to my hometown.this is a small town don't like changchun city just a small town.But this town's air is more clear than changchun city.My hometown was famous by leather.It's always attacts million people to went my hometown to buy leather products.
there are two hill in there.It's name is east hill and west hill.It was green in every seasons.It's beautiful in every seasons.Our home lives in the town of West.Distance from city centre is fifteen minutes' walk.Near my home there is a park.My parents was walked when after dinner.Chat with our neighbours.I think this is a nice time for my parents beacuse in the daytime they must earn money.They works in leather store.My hometown's leather store is biggest in the china.It's name is Haining China Leather City.You can buy everything and anything related to the leather.And my parents always work hard.They must pay millions of rent every year.
I in summer I often go to swimming with my friends.I'm good at swimming.But in changchun city so many people can't swim.I was very surprised for it.Then I know,the North City water shortage,and our province is famous by water.
this is somethings about my family and my hometown
give you best wishes
Dear daisy
Welcome to my hometown. This is a small town different changchun city just a big town. But this town's air ARE more clear than changchun city. My hometown was famous by leather. It's always millions of people to come my hometown to buy leather products.
There have two hills. Them nameS ARE east hill and west hill. It was green in EACH ONE season. It's beautiful in ALL seasons.MY home lives in the town of West.Distance from city centre is fifteen minutes' walk. Near my home there is a park. My parents WILL BE walkING when after dinner. Chat with our neighbours. I think this is a nice time WITH my parents beacuse in the daytime they must earn money. They work in leather store. My hometown's leather store is THE biggest in the china. THE name is Haining China Leather City. You can buy everything and anything related to the leather. And my parents always work hard.They must pay millions of rent every year.
IN summer I often go to swimming with my friends. I'm good at swimming. But in changchun city many people can't swim. I was very surprised for it. Then I know, the North City water shortage, and our province is famous by water.
THERE ARE something about my family and my hometown.
give MY best wishes TO YOU!
Welcome to my hometown. This is a small town different changchun city just a big town. But this town's air ARE more clear than changchun city. My hometown was famous by leather. It's always millions of people to come my hometown to buy leather products.
There have two hills. Them nameS ARE east hill and west hill. It was green in EACH ONE season. It's beautiful in ALL seasons.MY home lives in the town of West.Distance from city centre is fifteen minutes' walk. Near my home there is a park. My parents WILL BE walkING when after dinner. Chat with our neighbours. I think this is a nice time WITH my parents beacuse in the daytime they must earn money. They work in leather store. My hometown's leather store is THE biggest in the china. THE name is Haining China Leather City. You can buy everything and anything related to the leather. And my parents always work hard.They must pay millions of rent every year.
IN summer I often go to swimming with my friends. I'm good at swimming. But in changchun city many people can't swim. I was very surprised for it. Then I know, the North City water shortage, and our province is famous by water.
THERE ARE something about my family and my hometown.
give MY best wishes TO YOU!