作文修改!帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,My favo
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作文修改!
帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,
My favourite sport
Life lies in motion.Everyone has their favorite sports.And I like playing table tennis best.It brings me a great amount of happiness when I play table tennis.
When i feel stressed in study,playing table tennis can relax myself.I will go to play table tennis if i have spare time.Playing table tennis becomes a necessary activity in my life.
Alought I am not good at playing table tennis,ican get a lot of fun from it.
帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,
My favourite sport
Life lies in motion.Everyone has their favorite sports.And I like playing table tennis best.It brings me a great amount of happiness when I play table tennis.
When i feel stressed in study,playing table tennis can relax myself.I will go to play table tennis if i have spare time.Playing table tennis becomes a necessary activity in my life.
Alought I am not good at playing table tennis,ican get a lot of fun from it.
My favourite sport
Life lies in motion.Everyone has their(是不是改成"his/her"好一点) favorite sports.And I like playing table tennis best.It brings me a great amount of happiness when I play table tennis.
When i feel stressed in study,playing table tennis can relax myself.I will go to play table tennis if i have spare time.Playing table tennis becomes a necessary activity in my life.
Alought I am not good at playing table tennis,ican get a lot of fun from it.
语法错误是没有 楼主的作文很是标准的哇 不过再变化些事态啊什么的会更好看一点……比如Playing table tennis becomes(has become) a necessary activity in my life.
整体很通畅~very good~
Life lies in motion.Everyone has their(是不是改成"his/her"好一点) favorite sports.And I like playing table tennis best.It brings me a great amount of happiness when I play table tennis.
When i feel stressed in study,playing table tennis can relax myself.I will go to play table tennis if i have spare time.Playing table tennis becomes a necessary activity in my life.
Alought I am not good at playing table tennis,ican get a lot of fun from it.
语法错误是没有 楼主的作文很是标准的哇 不过再变化些事态啊什么的会更好看一点……比如Playing table tennis becomes(has become) a necessary activity in my life.
整体很通畅~very good~
作文修改!帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,My favo
作文修改!帮忙看下以下作文,或有语法错误或用词不当,或是你有更好,更有水平的句子来替代某一句,都来帮忙下,About m
帮忙看一下这句话有没语法错误或是用词不当
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